Rebecca's Haiku My Heart
Happy joyous clouds
getting ready for the fun;
blue plays hide and seek
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Couldn't ignore Dear friend Judith's comment
and have chosen to remove the 2nd 'stanza'...and rewrite it here..
blue plays hide and seek;
she spreads her wings to play with
happy joyous clouds
RS:)
blue plays hide and seek;
she spreads her wings to play with
happy joyous clouds
RS:)
Sounds like a delightful game!
ReplyDeleteWill it rain or won't it? Love the playfulness in your words today!
ReplyDeleteI adore your first stanza (if that's what's it called!) The joyousness absolutely shines through. The second stanza brought it down to earth and I wanted to stay in the sky!
ReplyDeleteoh ramesh you are the bringer of all that is joyous. thank you for being such a beautiful soul.
ReplyDeleteYES! Thank you for allowing me to keep soaring! You're the best.
ReplyDelete(how about "She spreads her light to play with joyous clouds"? - apologies Ramesh I can't resist giving my input - well, I CAN resist but I don't!)
your enchanting haiku makes my spirit soar!
ReplyDeleteBoth are perfect for sky fun. Play. Hide. Embrace.
ReplyDeleteThe rewrite is so joyous and uplifting. A great way to begin my Monday.
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