Friday, June 6, 2014

Blue Plays Hide & Seek.. Haiku


Rebecca's Haiku My Heart


Happy joyous clouds
getting ready for the fun;
blue plays hide and seek

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Couldn't ignore Dear  friend Judith's comment
and have chosen to remove the 2nd 'stanza'...and rewrite it here..

blue plays hide and seek;
she spreads her wings to play with 
happy joyous clouds



RS:)

8 comments:

  1. Will it rain or won't it? Love the playfulness in your words today!

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  2. I adore your first stanza (if that's what's it called!) The joyousness absolutely shines through. The second stanza brought it down to earth and I wanted to stay in the sky!

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  3. oh ramesh you are the bringer of all that is joyous. thank you for being such a beautiful soul.

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  4. YES! Thank you for allowing me to keep soaring! You're the best.

    (how about "She spreads her light to play with joyous clouds"? - apologies Ramesh I can't resist giving my input - well, I CAN resist but I don't!)

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  5. your enchanting haiku makes my spirit soar!

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  6. Both are perfect for sky fun. Play. Hide. Embrace.

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  7. The rewrite is so joyous and uplifting. A great way to begin my Monday.

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