Sunday, June 15, 2014

She Opens the Door.. Haiku..




Haiku for Haiku Horizons..
Prompt : Open




She opens the door
to her lonely heart;
dreams rush in for space


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She knows that 
I know it too;
open secret



RS:)

17 comments:

  1. Nice. I was gonna go with romance, but I chose world peace instead:)

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  2. Nice haiku! Between lovers, open secrets are definitive best...

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  4. ah ! enthralling ! and very classical too !

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  5. Opening her heart to dreams...nice !

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  6. open secret, loved the way you have kept the Haiku open-ended RS. The secret can range from love to hate to just about any secret. Brilliantly done!!

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  7. wow! the first one is magical! :) both the haiku are lovely

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  8. I like the image of dreams rushing in to fill the void -- very nice :)

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  9. loved the Haiku! the second one is awesome :)

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  10. Open/known secret ! Could not help but smile .
    always a delight to revisit your space.

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  11. Second one is really good...
    And 1st one is sweet as always!

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