Sunday, June 15, 2014

She Opens the Door.. Haiku..




Haiku for Haiku Horizons..
Prompt : Open




She opens the door
to her lonely heart;
dreams rush in for space


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She knows that 
I know it too;
open secret



RS:)
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17 comments:

  1. AnonymousJune 15, 2014 at 2:14 PM

    Nice. I was gonna go with romance, but I chose world peace instead:)

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  2. AnonymousJune 15, 2014 at 11:08 PM

    very nice Ramesh.

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  3. Englepappa/ Ole JNJune 15, 2014 at 11:10 PM

    Nice haiku! Between lovers, open secrets are definitive best...

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  5. AnonymousJune 16, 2014 at 9:28 AM

    ah ! enthralling ! and very classical too !

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  6. AnonymousJune 16, 2014 at 2:02 PM

    ah so romantic!

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  7. rallentandaJune 17, 2014 at 3:02 AM

    Opening her heart to dreams...nice !

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  8. AnonymousJune 17, 2014 at 5:56 AM

    Lovely, Ramesh.

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  9. Gillena CoxJune 17, 2014 at 7:48 AM

    nice one

    much love...

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  10. ReshmaJune 17, 2014 at 4:11 PM

    open secret, loved the way you have kept the Haiku open-ended RS. The secret can range from love to hate to just about any secret. Brilliantly done!!

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  11. UnknownJune 18, 2014 at 1:12 AM

    wow! the first one is magical! :) both the haiku are lovely

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  12. AnonymousJune 18, 2014 at 3:43 PM

    Lovely haiku.

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  13. AnonymousJune 18, 2014 at 6:33 PM

    I like the image of dreams rushing in to fill the void -- very nice :)

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  14. Ankita June 18, 2014 at 10:38 PM

    loved the Haiku! the second one is awesome :)

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  15. kalpana solsiJune 22, 2014 at 7:01 AM

    The first one is so romantic.

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  16. Live2cherishJune 22, 2014 at 11:03 AM

    Open/known secret ! Could not help but smile .
    always a delight to revisit your space.

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  17. LocomenteJune 23, 2014 at 2:53 AM

    Second one is really good...
    And 1st one is sweet as always!

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