Written for Haiku Horizon
Prompt: Cut
A Happy Haiku...
Sharper rays of sun
cut the things mercilessly;
half moon in the sky
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half moon in the sky;
to keep it five seven five
I cut many words
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I cut many words
yet sun, moon and sky remain ;
a happy haiku
RS:)
sun and sky
ReplyDeleteon those you always
can rely
Nice set!
I agree with one of a class - nice set.
ReplyDeleteYes, with sunmoon and sky you are assured of a happy haiku!
ReplyDeleteNo matter what you can always count on the sun and sky returning. Nice!
ReplyDeleteVery nice series!
ReplyDeleteThis is a great series -- but the second one made me chuckle out loud -- loved the humor. :)
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