Rebecca's Haiku My Heart
Strong winds toss around
that little piece of white cloud;
ah, loneliness
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Ah, loneliness;
she doesn't even know how
to write a haiku..
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To write a haiku
and build a world on her palm;
he is in a trance
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He is in a trance;
moments quietly pass by as
God says,"let him be"..
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God says, "let him be";
her thought stops on the edge
of his tranquil mind..
RS:)
Poor little cloud. The tranquility will let the thoughts in when they are ready. On my post today, I woke up with the words in my head, out of nowhere, out of sleep. Tranquil. It happens. :)
ReplyDeleteMay the loneliness be as fleeting as a cloud passing in the sky, while the beauty of these words lingers on.
ReplyDeleteMaybe her haiku are written on the wind! ;)
ReplyDeleteLove how each fits in the great chain and stands alone. Mt favorite:
ReplyDeleteHe is in a trance;
moments quietly pass by as
God says,"let him be"..
On the edge of his
ReplyDeletetranquil mind, World of love
Loneliness melt
There is also a joy to be lonely....though it is for a short time. When loneliness shatter its like a new day.....
ReplyDeleteLoneliness shattered
Her voice knocked doors
Sun shines again.
when i read your haiku i am swept away.
ReplyDeletetruly the depth and wealth of feeling is so instilled in each letter comprising each word. i sit back feeling as satisfied and filled as if you have crafted an entire book that i never want to end.