Monday, August 25, 2014

A Pink Umbrella - A story in Haiku..

Written for Haiku Horizons
Prompt: Sense
shared with Haiku My Heart

A PINK  UMBRELLA..


A pink umbrella
in her hands makes sense;
thundering black clouds

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thundering black clouds;
birds quietly hide in their nests
sensing a big storm

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sensing a big storm,
he draws her under the roof;
a pink umbrella

**

a pink umbrella;
his sensible stroke of brush 
finishes painting..




RS:)

7 comments:

  1. I like colourful umbrellas, to counteract the greys and blacks of a thundering storm. Lovely imagery in this haiku!

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  2. How interesting to think that the entire scene might have occurred in a painting -- quite a different approach to the prompt. Very nice!

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  3. These are all beautiful images. The pink umbrella is the idee fixe. Well done. !

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  4. I soooo loved this! :)

    Paints a wonderful picture in my mind!

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  5. How gallant to draw her under the umbrella--or how seductive!

    Sensing Wetness and Making Sense

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  6. Lovely and creative story inb haiku

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