Written for Haiku Horizons
Prompt: Sense
shared with Haiku My Heart
A PINK UMBRELLA..
A pink umbrella
in her hands makes sense;
thundering black clouds
**
thundering black clouds;
birds quietly hide in their nests
sensing a big storm
**
sensing a big storm,
he draws her under the roof;
a pink umbrella
**
a pink umbrella;
his sensible stroke of brush
finishes painting..
RS:)
I like colourful umbrellas, to counteract the greys and blacks of a thundering storm. Lovely imagery in this haiku!
ReplyDeleteHow interesting to think that the entire scene might have occurred in a painting -- quite a different approach to the prompt. Very nice!
ReplyDeleteThese are all beautiful images. The pink umbrella is the idee fixe. Well done. !
ReplyDeleteI soooo loved this! :)
ReplyDeletePaints a wonderful picture in my mind!
So nice. I could envision it.
ReplyDeleteHow gallant to draw her under the umbrella--or how seductive!
ReplyDeleteSensing Wetness and Making Sense
Lovely and creative story inb haiku
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