First a poem
that was born in my heart today morning..from
where will stem
a Haiku for Haiku Horizons
Share with Haiku My Heart
Share with Haiku My Heart
I Spill Some Sun Here..
"Sky is clearer and blue
take some Sun home with you"
so said to me a senior friend
I obeyed
taking some in my eyes,
while some got stuck on my face
and a little entered in my heart.
I know
you will find my words
happier & brighter
as I spill some Sun here..
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Thanks to my Senior Friend
Mr. Sunil Hazra Choudhury for triggering these
thoughts..during my morning walk..
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Written for Haiku Horizons..shared with Haiku My Heart
Written for Haiku Horizons..shared with Haiku My Heart
Prompt: After
I spill some
sun here for her ;
after-thought
after-thought;
pinkish glow on her face
says it all
RS:)
ah love this.
ReplyDeletetaking some in my eyes,
while some got stuck on my face
and a little entered in my heart...
This is beautiful! May the warmth of the Sun stay in your heart..
ReplyDeletelovely! :)
ReplyDeleteromantic RS :-)
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Romantic and beautiful!
ReplyDeletebrilliant and romantic. interesting way of writing a haiku.
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful and romantic.
ReplyDeletetake some sun with you....isn't that beautiful......may the Sun always smile on you and shower its warmth and love ......
ReplyDeleteYour poem about the sun and spreading it around is so beautiful. Even the haiku shines with its pinkish glow. Very nicely penned!
ReplyDeleteThat pinkish glow is priceless :-)
ReplyDeleteA glow on a face says so much!
ReplyDeleteSharing One More Treat
KEEP SPREADING THE SUNSHINE.
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