Monday, September 21, 2015

After-thought... A Haiku


First a poem
that was born in my heart today morning..from
where will stem 
a Haiku for Haiku Horizons
Share with Haiku My Heart


I  Spill Some Sun Here..


"Sky is clearer and blue
take some Sun home with you"
so said to me a senior friend
I obeyed 
taking some in my eyes,
while some got stuck on my face
and a little entered in my heart.
I know 
you will find my words 
 happier &  brighter
 as I spill some Sun here..


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Thanks to my Senior Friend 
Mr. Sunil Hazra Choudhury for triggering these
thoughts..during my morning walk..

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Written for Haiku Horizons..shared with Haiku My Heart
Prompt: After



I spill some 
sun here for her ;
after-thought


after-thought;
pinkish glow on her face
says it all 



RS:)

13 comments:

  1. ah love this.

    taking some in my eyes,
    while some got stuck on my face
    and a little entered in my heart...

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  2. This is beautiful! May the warmth of the Sun stay in your heart..

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  3. romantic RS :-)

    http://drishti.co/2015/09/21/eternal-hope/

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  4. brilliant and romantic. interesting way of writing a haiku.

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  5. take some sun with you....isn't that beautiful......may the Sun always smile on you and shower its warmth and love ......

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  6. Your poem about the sun and spreading it around is so beautiful. Even the haiku shines with its pinkish glow. Very nicely penned!

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  7. That pinkish glow is priceless :-)

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