Friday, September 11, 2015

Two Faces... haiku..

Written for Rebecca's Haiku My Heart
& Haiku Horizons 

 For Haiku Horizons : Before

Sun rises
long before I wake up;
starry nights

Starry nights;
reluctant Moon leaves when
Sun rises
Sun rises 
making one side glow;
two faces
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Two Faces, 
one dark another bright;
clouds cover      


Clouds cover 
and then uncover;
sunny hearts

**

Sunny hearts;
shining stars float in 
darker skies


Darker skies
hide in sunny hearts;
clouds cover


**


Sunny hearts; 
shining stars fade not
in clear skies


In clear skies
soar birds of happy dreams;
sunny hearts..


RS:)
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15 comments:

  1. rebeccaSeptember 11, 2015 at 9:06 AM

    dear ramesh-your sunny heart and star filled haiku always brighten my world. thank you for being with us each friday spreading your light!

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  2. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 11, 2015 at 9:39 AM

    I'm glad that nothing can dim the sunny hearts!

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  3. MarkSeptember 11, 2015 at 10:41 AM

    Dark skies can never obliterate the light!

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  4. J CSeptember 11, 2015 at 11:26 AM

    You make sunny hearts with your happy haiku writings.

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  5. gmaSeptember 11, 2015 at 12:03 PM

    I love when sunny heart emerge and share their light.

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  6. Annie JeffriesSeptember 11, 2015 at 1:19 PM

    So complex made to seem so deceptively simple.

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  7. payal agarwalSeptember 12, 2015 at 1:47 AM

    The glow of sunny hearts reflect in your beautiful haiku.

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  8. kalpana solsiSeptember 14, 2015 at 1:51 AM

    Sunny hearts, stars and sunshine rule your haiku.

    http://ideasolsi65.blogspot.in/2015/09/before.html?m=1

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  9. Reading PleasureSeptember 14, 2015 at 7:16 AM

    Your words are brightness in themselves.

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  10. UnknownSeptember 14, 2015 at 12:20 PM

    So beautifully written, light is in the heart despite any kind of darkness...such a lovely read, Ramesh!

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  11. J Cosmo NewberySeptember 15, 2015 at 2:58 AM

    An interesting progression.

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  12. LocomenteSeptember 15, 2015 at 4:39 AM

    Like a sweet song... Very nice!

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  13. UnknownSeptember 15, 2015 at 7:38 AM

    wow... what wonderful imagery RS :-)
    so here I am, as promised :-)

    http://drishti.co/2015/09/14/ancient-wisdom/

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  14. UnknownSeptember 15, 2015 at 7:42 PM

    Beautiful...

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  15. Bastet's Waka LibrarySeptember 16, 2015 at 1:10 AM

    Oh ... what a wonderful post I enjoyed reading this lovely mix of haiku! Bastet

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