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Haiku My Heart
Between yes and no
exist invisible cracks;
nothing smooth for thoughts
exist invisible cracks;
nothing smooth for thoughts
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nothing smooth for thoughts;
she keeps falling in this space
between yes and no
RS:)
Being stuck in traffic is a good time to meditate.
ReplyDelete"between yes and no" - that is a classic position for many people. well penned!
ReplyDeleteso what was the final verdict? :-) lovely one, RS :-)
ReplyDeletehere's mine:
http://drishti.co/2015/09/28/a-thing-of-beauty-is-a-joy-forever/
A difficult space to find oneself in. Excellent haiku !
ReplyDeleteI like how you coupled these haiku .. nicely done! Bastet
ReplyDeleteNice one
ReplyDeletegreat......invisible cracks.....liked it....
ReplyDeleteAh to be stuck with a maybe...love your haiku series...surely makes us wonder where we stand in situations like this...I am the queen of procrastination.
ReplyDeleteTheses are great together! Nice job!
ReplyDeleteYes, in the crack one is stuck with "maybe". Good one!
ReplyDeleteI have been in that space more often than I care to think.
ReplyDeleteWell, sometimes maybe is the only option. Aking a pause to think is a good thing.
ReplyDeleteWell, sometimes maybe is the only option. Aking a pause to think is a good thing.
ReplyDeletemy grand daughter (she will be three this month) uses the 'maybe' quite efficiently to try to get her own way
ReplyDeletemuch love...