Saturday, September 5, 2015

Singing Caged Birds... Haiku



Haiku Horizons & Rebecca's Haiku My Heart...

First Haiku for prompt Float..


Quietly floats a boat 
making waves in still waters;
morning sun appears


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Morning Sun appears
as I stop to hug a tree; 
singing caged birds


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Singing caged birds;
tall trees pick a bit of sky
and throw in the cage 



© RS:)

13 comments:

  1. I wouldn't mind being enclosed in the shade of a tree on the hot, hot days.

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  2. I really love your haikus, and the way u connect the two...


    tall trees pick up a bit o sky n throw in d cage. ah lovely

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  3. This is so beautiful.. A very good morning to you. :)

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  4. Awww, those two last ones are just so beautiful...makes me want to hug a tree. Your writing makes the emotions contagious:)

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  5. dear ramesh,
    visiting you is like finding the perfect bit of sky to rest in. your beauty in thought and haiku are a gift- thank you!

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  6. aha... splendid imagery :-) some day I want to try this style too RS :-)

    http://drishti.co/2015/09/07/fly-right/

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  7. I would love to be drifting in a boat right about now. Lovely!

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  8. Lovely chained haiku ... Bastet.

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  9. I woukd love to laze around in the boat reading a book. Beautiful lines.
    http://ideasolsi65.blogspot.in/2015/09/float.html?m=1

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  10. I woukd love to laze around in the boat reading a book. Beautiful lines.
    http://ideasolsi65.blogspot.in/2015/09/float.html?m=1

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