Saturday, September 5, 2015

Singing Caged Birds... Haiku



Haiku Horizons & Rebecca's Haiku My Heart...

 First Haiku for prompt Float..


Quietly floats a boat 
making waves in still waters;
morning sun appears


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Morning Sun appears
as I stop to hug a tree; 
singing caged birds


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 Singing caged birds;
tall trees pick a bit of sky
and throw in the cage 



© RS:)
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13 comments:

  1. Annie JeffriesSeptember 5, 2015 at 7:16 AM

    I wouldn't mind being enclosed in the shade of a tree on the hot, hot days.

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  2. Gazal BharadwajSeptember 5, 2015 at 1:19 PM

    I really love your haikus, and the way u connect the two...


    tall trees pick up a bit o sky n throw in d cage. ah lovely

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  3. payal agarwalSeptember 5, 2015 at 8:41 PM

    This is so beautiful.. A very good morning to you. :)

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  4. TournesolDansUnJardinSeptember 7, 2015 at 10:39 PM

    Awww, those two last ones are just so beautiful...makes me want to hug a tree. Your writing makes the emotions contagious:)

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  5. UnknownSeptember 7, 2015 at 11:54 PM

    Those are such beautiful lines!

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  6. rebeccaSeptember 8, 2015 at 6:14 AM

    dear ramesh,
    visiting you is like finding the perfect bit of sky to rest in. your beauty in thought and haiku are a gift- thank you!

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  7. UnknownSeptember 8, 2015 at 6:37 AM

    aha... splendid imagery :-) some day I want to try this style too RS :-)

    http://drishti.co/2015/09/07/fly-right/

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  8. UnknownSeptember 8, 2015 at 9:24 AM

    I would love to be drifting in a boat right about now. Lovely!

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  9. Reading PleasureSeptember 8, 2015 at 9:36 AM

    Lovely, Ramesh.

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  10. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 9, 2015 at 12:00 PM

    Ah, yes, even small boats make waves. Unavoidable.

    On a Parade Float

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  11. Bastet's Waka LibrarySeptember 10, 2015 at 1:05 AM

    Lovely chained haiku ... Bastet.

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  12. kalpana solsiSeptember 13, 2015 at 3:19 AM

    I woukd love to laze around in the boat reading a book. Beautiful lines.
    http://ideasolsi65.blogspot.in/2015/09/float.html?m=1

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  13. kalpana solsiSeptember 13, 2015 at 3:19 AM

    I woukd love to laze around in the boat reading a book. Beautiful lines.
    http://ideasolsi65.blogspot.in/2015/09/float.html?m=1

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