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Saturday, September 4, 2010
Haiku Heights - Prompt: Beauty
Opposite steps Out of the mirror, shattering The myth of beauty
each has it's own take on beauty but they clearly are connected. I love the second best tho, the moons light on the wet roads.... "Splashing beauty" so original!
loved the second one...the moon is a wonderful topic for poetry...why don't you add music if you like it so much...it's really easy...I could help you thru it!...:)
Two very different takes on the prompt, Ramesh! :-) I especially liked the second haiku: it really put me there, watching the moonlight shining off puddles. I could even hear the splashing. So nicely done!
Both are beautiful.
ReplyDeleteLove towns wet roads.
moon walks... that is a visionaries eye
ReplyDeletemelting clouds, moon walks,..
ReplyDeletethey are stunning beauty...
loved your entry.
My Beauty Entry
Ramesh. Thanks for visiting my blog.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite line is "Moon walks on Town's wet roads." This is lovely. Your poems are quite lyrical and this is what I love the most.
Khaalidah
I really enjoyed the imagery in both haikus...I also love the line "Moon walks on town’s wet roads." Beautifully done.
ReplyDeleteMoon walks on town’s wet roads
ReplyDeleteSplashing beauty ....
Spreading radiance...
And whispering in theses ears,
Walk on...
Live on...
each has it's own take on beauty but they clearly are connected. I love the second best tho, the moons light on the wet roads.... "Splashing beauty" so original!
ReplyDeleteloved the second one...the moon is a wonderful topic for poetry...why don't you add music if you like it so much...it's really easy...I could help you thru it!...:)
ReplyDeleteTwo very different takes on the prompt, Ramesh! :-) I especially liked the second haiku: it really put me there, watching the moonlight shining off puddles. I could even hear the splashing. So nicely done!
ReplyDeleteIt's about time the myth of beauty is shattered ;) - good one.
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely loved the second one, moon walking on wet road... Brilliant!