Wednesday, September 22, 2010

WORDS DANCE WITH HAPPINESS..










WORDS DANCE WITH HAPPINESS..

Morning's fresh air nudges
And my mind quietly changes
Its lazy demeanour , turning europhic
With a rush the ripened thoughts
Fall on the pure spotless paper
Of my heart, where
The transformation takes place
Words dance with happiness
To the exotic tune of imagination
After getting all energised
Begin to slowly file in uneven
Straight lines in an indisciplined gait
Discipline would have made them rigid
Destroying their originality
And then how would they have
Turned in to this poem
Ah! they are happy to be moving
Through your discerning eyes this moment
Seeking the gift of your smiles
Would continue their eternal dance
As long as heart's drum keeps beating
And morning's fresh air continues to nudge...

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16 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 22, 2010 at 8:01 AM

    6AM today i sat in my room balcony and wrote a poem ! that was something that i never did before .. and it had a different feeling :) The poem some how reminded of that .. thank you

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  2. DeborahSeptember 22, 2010 at 9:06 AM

    Lovely poem :o)

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 22, 2010 at 9:13 AM

    Beautifully penned. Nice write. Love and Light, Sender

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  4. gautami tripathySeptember 22, 2010 at 9:23 AM

    Another good one..

    baton of time

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  5. AnonymousSeptember 22, 2010 at 9:27 AM

    Your writing is exquisite. I enjoyed

    visiting your blog.

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  6. DavidSeptember 22, 2010 at 9:44 AM

    "Ah! they are happy to be moving
    Through your discerning eyes this moment"
    What a great phrase that is, and wonderfully put. I like the thoughts you expressed here. I'll be back to read more.

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  7. Sherri B.September 22, 2010 at 11:53 AM

    The joy of letting the words flow, even if they're in crooked lines...lovely!

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  8. Thom GabrukiewiczSeptember 22, 2010 at 1:27 PM

    such lovely lines in this. I thank you for sharing.

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  9. Pravin NairSeptember 22, 2010 at 3:21 PM

    thank you sir for these lovely lines...

    I also thank you for your wonderfully kind comment on my b log..really appreciate that..thnks..

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  10. Tumblewords:September 22, 2010 at 6:49 PM

    An excellent tone to this lovely dance of words...

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  11. Thomma LynSeptember 22, 2010 at 7:10 PM

    This is beautiful -- a delightful and inspiring tribute to spontaneity!

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  12. haisleySeptember 22, 2010 at 7:22 PM

    What a great poem....
    http://scjcircleofthoughts.blogspot.com/2010/09/drifter.html
    tnx

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  13. SusannahSeptember 23, 2010 at 1:19 AM

    Such lovely lines in this. I enjoyed reading. :-)


    http://panopticulated.blogspot.com/2010/09/destiny-three-word-wednesday.html

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  14. ShailSeptember 23, 2010 at 7:06 AM

    I liked the thought of their 'indisciplined gait' :) Evokes a lovely picture. Good one.

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  15. anupamaSeptember 23, 2010 at 8:31 AM

    Pyaara Dost,
    Good Evening!
    When you let your words dance,
    We get the lovely poems to read,
    They are so sincere and honest,
    Expressions of heartfelt emotions...
    Our smiles are all for for you........
    Keep writing........
    Wishing you a lovely night,
    Sasneham,
    Anu

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  16. UnknownSeptember 25, 2010 at 7:16 PM

    ..and i love the lines ..."Discipline would have made them rigid
    Destroying their originality".....
    wonderful !!

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