Thursday, September 30, 2010

Joyous Stars Arrive..









Written for Haiku My Heart..




Happy Earth Invites;
And sliding down a Rainbow
Joyous stars arrive..


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Colourful stripes
Of cut rainbow, sway in sky
Teased by winds..
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20 comments:

  1. NankaOctober 1, 2010 at 12:21 AM

    Beautiful imagery created by the sliding stars on a rainbow and the swaying rainbow in the wind. Good work !!

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  2. EG CameraGirlOctober 1, 2010 at 1:14 AM

    I like the idea of sliding down a rainbow, :(

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  3. Marilyn & JeffOctober 1, 2010 at 1:38 AM

    I love you haikus, they paint such beautiful pictures.

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  4. AnonymousOctober 1, 2010 at 1:44 AM

    Super cheerful! I like this.

    All the best, Boonie

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  5. IleanaOctober 1, 2010 at 2:42 AM

    I love the thought of sliding down a rainbow. Beautiful haiku!

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  6. SpadomanOctober 1, 2010 at 4:27 AM

    A whimsical look at the universe, I like both your haiku. I'll look for that rainbow in the sky and watch the stars tumble down intom the heavens. Thank you.

    Peace.

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  7. rebeccaOctober 1, 2010 at 5:52 AM

    good morning ramesh,
    so glad to see you return to this friday salutation.
    love your focus on joy...
    shall we all arrive!

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  8. LeslieOctober 1, 2010 at 6:01 AM

    "joyous stars arrive"

    What a lovely phrase!

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  9. paper-n-soulOctober 1, 2010 at 7:19 AM

    I like "teased by winds..." My grandson (age 3) is 'helping' me read haiku this morning and he really likes your rainbow. He especially likes the idea of "sliding down a rainbow" - sounds like fun to me, too!

    ~Deb

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  10. Gazal BharadwajOctober 1, 2010 at 8:50 AM

    oh I like rainbows....

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  11. JeevesOctober 1, 2010 at 8:54 AM

    Amazing haikus

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  12. anupamaOctober 1, 2010 at 9:31 AM

    Pyaara Dost,
    Good Evening!
    Where is the rainbow?since long I am searching.....
    Wishing you a lovely weekend,
    Sasneham,
    Anu

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  13. MeriOctober 1, 2010 at 10:02 AM

    I like the second one much better than the first, but enjoyed the fact that they're paired.

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  14. Everyday GoddessOctober 1, 2010 at 2:00 PM

    Such excellent energy in both!

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  15. M. RekaOctober 1, 2010 at 3:38 PM

    I love your beautiful haikus, you are very talented :)

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  16. Noelle ClearwaterOctober 1, 2010 at 4:53 PM

    Ramesh,
    You have the true gift of Haiku and you bring joy and an open heart to all who read what you have written. Thank you for sharing.
    Noelle

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  17. AnonymousOctober 1, 2010 at 8:21 PM

    happy earth is a wonderful joyous phrase...

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  18. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallOctober 2, 2010 at 6:42 PM

    that's smart Haikus.

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  19. Uma AnandaneOctober 4, 2010 at 8:51 AM

    Lovely Haiku

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  20. ChèvrefeuilleFebruary 11, 2012 at 11:58 AM

    This is a real nice haiku Ramesh. I do understand that this one of the most read haiku by your hand is. I think you did a good job here.
    Lovely imagery.

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