Saturday, February 12, 2011

FIREBALL OF DREAMS BURN INSIDE...


Thanks to Tammie Lee for INCANDESCENT and Gemma Wiseman for IMPRESSION

Witten for OSI Prompt : Incandescent and Haiku Heights: Impression


Incandescent Moon
Leaves a happy impression,
Earth turns to look at..



For One Single Impression



FIREBALL OF DREAMS BURN INSIDE...


Incandescent heart
Beats in his chest, fireball of
Dreams burn inside..

Dreams burn inside
Eyes keep on searching them
Beyond skies far away

Beyond skies far away
Live two souls who watch their dream
Craving for dreams

Craving for dreams
And they shower their blessings
Fire inside calms down

Fire inside calms down
Moon turns from red to yellow
Fresh dreams reappear

Fresh dreams reappear
This time in his eyes, which rain
Incandescently
Posted by at

24 comments:

  1. NankaFebruary 12, 2011 at 9:52 PM

    All the burning desires and craving for dreams have been beautifully converted into lilting poetry, RS!! You seem to be glowing in Haikus.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Tammie LeeFebruary 12, 2011 at 10:23 PM

    quite lovely sir.

    ReplyDelete
  3. Harshad MehtaFebruary 12, 2011 at 11:19 PM

    Heart and tears ! Everything else is a detail.

    Well written.

    ReplyDelete
  4. anthonynorthFebruary 13, 2011 at 2:20 AM

    You can feel the passion in this. Great words.

    ReplyDelete
  5. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryFebruary 13, 2011 at 7:56 AM

    earth turns to look at it.
    what a cute line.

    ReplyDelete
  6. AnonymousFebruary 13, 2011 at 9:29 AM

    I love your comparison of incandescent to hearts, love and dreams.

    ReplyDelete
  7. Jane DoeFebruary 13, 2011 at 12:29 PM

    Absolutely stunning! The imagery is amazing! Great writing.

    ReplyDelete
  8. AnonymousFebruary 13, 2011 at 2:41 PM

    Making bright me night, the moon surely takes view up high. Thank you. Please have a good new week.


    daily athens

    ReplyDelete
  9. PattiFebruary 13, 2011 at 4:39 PM

    Half a world away and we were thinking the same ideas for our haikus. On the longer verse I love the last stanza!

    ReplyDelete
  10. Uma AnandaneFebruary 14, 2011 at 3:08 AM

    The haiku and your loop_poetry is very nice.
    The last haiku is stunning

    ReplyDelete
  11. zoya gautamFebruary 14, 2011 at 10:23 AM

    i surely like the way u emote & thank u for for visiting me ..

    ReplyDelete
  12. Julie Jordan ScottFebruary 14, 2011 at 10:43 AM

    There is such musicality here. Love the rhythms within the emotion. Lovely.

    One of my love poems today.

    ReplyDelete
  13. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallFebruary 14, 2011 at 12:25 PM

    Earth turns to look at?

    love the line.

    A++

    ReplyDelete
  14. AnonymousFebruary 14, 2011 at 7:36 PM

    I absolutely love the haiku! Very captivating!

    Teresa

    ReplyDelete
  15. aayanmanFebruary 14, 2011 at 10:38 PM

    Well crafted,drafted and visualized and felt.!
    GB

    ReplyDelete
  16. gautami tripathyFebruary 15, 2011 at 8:24 AM

    Nice work!


    demise

    ReplyDelete
  17. SandyCarlsonFebruary 15, 2011 at 6:00 PM

    Very, very nice. Intimate. I like very much!

    ReplyDelete
  18. The Write GirlFebruary 15, 2011 at 7:05 PM

    Beautiful rhyming and flow in both poems Ramesh.

    ReplyDelete
  19. AnonymousFebruary 15, 2011 at 7:20 PM

    Fantastic write and brimming with passion

    ReplyDelete
  20. budh.aaahFebruary 16, 2011 at 12:52 AM

    Really nice Ramesh..loved the haiku

    ReplyDelete
  21. Brian MillerFebruary 16, 2011 at 3:44 AM

    love the turning in the haiku...it is very nice...the second, very nice imagery and passionate....

    ReplyDelete
  22. Steve IsaakFebruary 16, 2011 at 1:20 PM

    Smile-birthing short poem, excellent.

    ReplyDelete
  23. AnonymousFebruary 17, 2011 at 1:21 AM

    Woww... I loved the progression in the poem, Ramesh.. from red desire to soft dreams ... beautifully written... and your poetry form was really very lovely!!
    (sigh) Moon has such a magical effect on us...doesn't it?1 :)

    ReplyDelete
  24. JimFebruary 18, 2011 at 1:31 PM

    Aw to basque in the light and heat from those burning hearts. Now to watch and learn as they are doing so well here.
    ..

    ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)