Saturday, February 12, 2011

FIREBALL OF DREAMS BURN INSIDE...


Thanks to Tammie Lee for INCANDESCENT and Gemma Wiseman for IMPRESSION

Witten for OSI Prompt : Incandescent and Haiku Heights: Impression


Incandescent Moon
Leaves a happy impression,
Earth turns to look at..



For One Single Impression



FIREBALL OF DREAMS BURN INSIDE...


Incandescent heart
Beats in his chest, fireball of
Dreams burn inside..

Dreams burn inside
Eyes keep on searching them
Beyond skies far away

Beyond skies far away
Live two souls who watch their dream
Craving for dreams

Craving for dreams
And they shower their blessings
Fire inside calms down

Fire inside calms down
Moon turns from red to yellow
Fresh dreams reappear

Fresh dreams reappear
This time in his eyes, which rain
Incandescently


25 comments:

  1. All the burning desires and craving for dreams have been beautifully converted into lilting poetry, RS!! You seem to be glowing in Haikus.

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  2. Heart and tears ! Everything else is a detail.

    Well written.

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  3. You can feel the passion in this. Great words.

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  4. earth turns to look at it.
    what a cute line.

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  5. I love your comparison of incandescent to hearts, love and dreams.

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  6. Absolutely stunning! The imagery is amazing! Great writing.

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  7. Making bright me night, the moon surely takes view up high. Thank you. Please have a good new week.


    daily athens

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  8. Half a world away and we were thinking the same ideas for our haikus. On the longer verse I love the last stanza!

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  9. The haiku and your loop_poetry is very nice.
    The last haiku is stunning

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  10. i surely like the way u emote & thank u for for visiting me ..

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  11. There is such musicality here. Love the rhythms within the emotion. Lovely.

    One of my love poems today.

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  12. Earth turns to look at?

    love the line.

    A++

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  13. I absolutely love the haiku! Very captivating!

    Teresa

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  14. Well crafted,drafted and visualized and felt.!
    GB

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  15. Very, very nice. Intimate. I like very much!

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  16. Beautiful rhyming and flow in both poems Ramesh.

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  17. Fantastic write and brimming with passion

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  18. Really nice Ramesh..loved the haiku

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  19. love the turning in the haiku...it is very nice...the second, very nice imagery and passionate....

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  20. Smile-birthing short poem, excellent.

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  21. Woww... I loved the progression in the poem, Ramesh.. from red desire to soft dreams ... beautifully written... and your poetry form was really very lovely!!
    (sigh) Moon has such a magical effect on us...doesn't it?1 :)

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  22. Hello, Thanks for the love to Poetry Potluck! You Rock!

    Awards 4 Poetry Potluck Week 22, Enjoy!

    Your contribution means a world to us, Happy Thursday!
    See you next time!
    xoxox

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  23. Aw to basque in the light and heat from those burning hearts. Now to watch and learn as they are doing so well here.
    ..

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