For One Stop Poetry Form ~ Tanka and for Poetry Potluck..
I say to Rainbow,
" Hey where do you come from, dear,
and where do you go
I am just in love with you,
So not bothered to know.. "
(Hope it is 5-7-5-7-7..)
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For Poetry Potluck..
Poet's Love
Clouds rain,
Showering words
Poet immerses
Each word
Soaked in passion
Rocks melt
Sun rises, and
Rainbow appears
Reflects love
Music from flutter
Of butterfly's wings
Flowers dance
Moon is quiet
Watching expressions
On faces of stars
Clouds and rocks
Sun, rain and rainbow,
Stars and flowers
Butterflies & Moon
Ah, to think of a poem
Without them...
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Oh yes!! This is really true, Ramesh... it's quite unimaginable to write a poem without at least one of these elements... in some form or the other, they always make an appearance in our poems...
ReplyDeleteSuch a delightful read as always, Ramesh... beautiful and perfect poem for our potluck this week! A treat for the soul!
A very happy valentine's day to you and your beloved from me and all of us here at potluck!
Lovely tanka x
ReplyDeleteDelightful I enjoyed reading it..
ReplyDeletethanks for sharing..
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/01/whispers-emptiness-and-soul.html
sweet love words.. very nice !
ReplyDeleteA delightful tanka!
ReplyDeleteLady Nyo
awesome...
ReplyDeleteHappy V Day.
A++
beautiful imagery ~ rainbows and sunshine ~ love, love, ~ Lib ~
ReplyDeleteDelightful colorful tanka!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful nature inspires love..
ReplyDeleteI love these! Especially that first conversation.
ReplyDeletelove the talking to yourself in the end.. happy valentine! here's mine.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/05/11/happily-tied/
ReplyDeleteIndeed fine words
ReplyDeleteLove is so individual - we have so many ways to look at her
Nice tanka
Thanks for sharing with One Stop
Beautiful expressions of love....
ReplyDeleteFantastic works..
ReplyDeletelove them all... :)