Thursday, February 10, 2011

My Little Soul Shouts

Written for Haiku Challenge..of SiS and Haiku My Heart..


My little soul shouts,
To hold my bigger mind, fails,
Wins heart’s sympathy..
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9 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 10, 2011 at 3:48 PM

    The mind is what gets us in trouble, the wild and untethered mind.

    Great, made me pause and think.

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  2. BeyondFebruary 10, 2011 at 6:42 PM

    I would say
    "my little soul shouts,
    to hold my heart, fails,
    Wins minds reasons"

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  3. Ramesh SoodFebruary 10, 2011 at 7:56 PM

    For me it's soul who wins sympathy of heart.. for haert watches her struggle to lead the mind.. which rarely happens..

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  4. Amanda MooreFebruary 10, 2011 at 9:06 PM

    I like this just the way it is, is it not the soul that speaks to the heart, I know mine does! Beautiful job!

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  5. MeriFebruary 11, 2011 at 3:49 PM

    My heart and soul are constantly conversing.

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  6. rebeccaFebruary 11, 2011 at 9:30 PM

    ramesh...
    you are completely thoughtful,
    and thought filled.

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  7. Someone is SpecialFebruary 11, 2011 at 10:10 PM

    Remeshji, what a Haiku.. No words..

    Someone is Special

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  8. AnonymousFebruary 12, 2011 at 3:15 PM

    the mind is wonderful yet a mystery to most.... and we are three...

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  9. paper-n-soulFebruary 13, 2011 at 11:27 AM

    The whisper of heart and soul will always tug at us. Beautiful.

    Deb

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