Wednesday, February 16, 2011

God's Secret Expression..

For Haiku Challenge at Few Miles by SiS..


Lines on hands, God’s
Secret expression, man tries
Yet can’t unravel..



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8 comments:

  1. BeyondFebruary 17, 2011 at 1:48 AM

    Amazing Haiku...

    I have just seen those lines getting darker with work and sweat.

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  2. Rashmirekha MannaFebruary 17, 2011 at 8:04 AM

    But the secret treasures of blessings do unfold when we trust, when we have faith... When we say
    "Thy will be done"

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  3. Kristen HaskellFebruary 17, 2011 at 9:07 AM

    All the secrets of God we try to unravel and yet I think we tangle it more than unravel. Very beautiful Haiku.

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  4. NankaFebruary 17, 2011 at 9:18 AM

    There are many a things that man has yet to untangle!!

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  5. Rek SeshFebruary 17, 2011 at 10:58 AM

    beautiful words...but the lines seem to get dimmer as we age, maybe upset that we haven't seen through them yet...

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  6. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallFebruary 17, 2011 at 11:54 AM

    your words do magic.
    I love the imagery.

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  7. eyeographyFebruary 18, 2011 at 12:19 AM

    very thoughtful and strong :)

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  8. Someone is SpecialFebruary 18, 2011 at 6:04 AM

    Powerful Haiku.. It conveys a lot Rameshji..

    Someone is Special

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