Wednesday, March 9, 2011

A Haunting Haiku....

Written for 3WW: Dainty, Haunting, Tantalize


Dainty sounds of songs
In darkness tantalize, ah,
Signs of light haunt me..

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By: RS



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13 comments:

  1. Jae RoseMarch 9, 2011 at 9:39 AM

    This was the perfect return to the haiku..a sliver of light..Jae

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  2. anthonynorthMarch 9, 2011 at 10:29 AM

    An excellent haiku.

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  3. Uma AnandaneMarch 9, 2011 at 10:36 AM

    Nice haiku...well utilized words

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  4. Sheilagh LeeMarch 9, 2011 at 10:59 AM

    Very well put with all the prompts a wonderful haiku!

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  5. AltonianMarch 9, 2011 at 11:09 AM

    Tantalizing sounds in the darkness; but wait, what will the light bring....? Beautiful haiku, with a touch of tension.

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  6. AnonymousMarch 9, 2011 at 3:58 PM

    Nice haiku. Artistic handling of the prompt!

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  7. LisaMarch 9, 2011 at 5:27 PM

    Very tantalizing haiku.

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  8. NankaMarch 9, 2011 at 8:47 PM

    The tantalizing strains of dainty music under a dark starry night can be very haunting indeed!! Reminds me of the desert Music festival in Rajasthan!!

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  9. NankaMarch 9, 2011 at 9:04 PM

    Hey RS!! you have a typo error in your Haiku!! Tantalize needs to be corrected!!

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  10. trishaMarch 10, 2011 at 6:42 AM

    beautiful Ramesh, lovely use of the prompt. you transformed it into dawn.

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  11. gautami tripathyMarch 10, 2011 at 7:51 AM

    Nicely written...

    walk the world

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  12. Rashmirekha MannaMarch 10, 2011 at 10:31 AM

    Yes they do...


    A beautiful handful of words

    Regards

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  13. Short PoemsMarch 11, 2011 at 12:05 AM

    Nice haiku, sooo wisely done!

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