Wednesday, March 9, 2011

A Haunting Haiku....

Written for 3WW: Dainty, Haunting, Tantalize


Dainty sounds of songs
In darkness tantalize, ah,
Signs of light haunt me..

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By: RS



13 comments:

  1. This was the perfect return to the haiku..a sliver of light..Jae

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  2. Nice haiku...well utilized words

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  3. Very well put with all the prompts a wonderful haiku!

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  4. Tantalizing sounds in the darkness; but wait, what will the light bring....? Beautiful haiku, with a touch of tension.

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  5. Nice haiku. Artistic handling of the prompt!

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  6. The tantalizing strains of dainty music under a dark starry night can be very haunting indeed!! Reminds me of the desert Music festival in Rajasthan!!

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  7. Hey RS!! you have a typo error in your Haiku!! Tantalize needs to be corrected!!

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  8. beautiful Ramesh, lovely use of the prompt. you transformed it into dawn.

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  9. Yes they do...


    A beautiful handful of words

    Regards

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