Wednesday, March 16, 2011

I Know You Blushed..

Written for 3WW.... Tickle, Breeze, Mellow.. from my archives of yesteryears..



When mellow breeze
Tickled my face and then yours
I know you blushed..
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20 comments:

  1. Rashmirekha MannaMarch 16, 2011 at 11:38 AM

    Nice... romantic

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  2. AltonianMarch 16, 2011 at 1:37 PM

    Utterly charming, and romantic.

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  3. anthonynorthMarch 16, 2011 at 3:13 PM

    Yes, very romantic. Nice words.

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  4. UnknownMarch 16, 2011 at 3:43 PM

    Utterly sweet... endearing.
    Here's Mine:
    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/03/16/lucky-to-call-you-friend/

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  5. Sheilagh LeeMarch 16, 2011 at 5:30 PM

    Sheilagh Lee said :sweet charming and utterly romantic well done

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  6. Kimiko Love MartinezMarch 16, 2011 at 6:59 PM

    Simple and sweet and a moment we can all identify with!

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  7. Anya PadyamMarch 16, 2011 at 7:29 PM

    that is really really sweet

    such a nice piece!

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  8. NankaMarch 16, 2011 at 8:16 PM

    Cute Haiku RS......and it reminded me of yesteryear heroines from Bollywood movies!! :D

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  9. ChristineMarch 17, 2011 at 9:40 AM

    So hard to hide a blush, nice.

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  10. MarinelaMarch 17, 2011 at 12:57 PM

    Wrapped up soooooooooooo nicely :)

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  11. RenMarch 17, 2011 at 6:10 PM

    Wonderful.
    A welcomed treat after the night I had.

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  12. The Poetry BinMarch 18, 2011 at 1:10 AM

    Yes, definitely sweet and romantic :)

    The Poetry Bin

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  13. Magical Mystical TeacherMarch 18, 2011 at 11:42 AM

    I can see that blush so clearly! (I can even feel the burning in my cheeks!)

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  14. Marilyn & JeffMarch 18, 2011 at 11:55 AM

    Just beautiful.
    You have a most wonderful way of writing so very lightly on the page to create magic.

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  15. GrammyMarch 18, 2011 at 5:57 PM

    Awe, so sweet : )

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  16. rebeccaMarch 18, 2011 at 7:52 PM

    sweet indeed...

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  17. ms pieMarch 19, 2011 at 2:41 PM

    the intimacy of a touch between two... beautiful...

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  18. Margaret PangertMarch 19, 2011 at 8:30 PM

    Ah, to be young again and feel a gentle breeze and the warmth of color diffusing across her face... This is so tender and delicate--the perfect haiku.

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  19. Rosie GanMarch 19, 2011 at 11:27 PM

    Subtle sensual and evocative...I like it.
    Rosie

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  20. Noelle ClearwaterMarch 20, 2011 at 9:04 PM

    I like this one. It is subtle and romantic. I agree. Very interesting Ramesh!
    Noelle

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