Wednesday, March 16, 2011

I Know You Blushed..

Written for 3WW.... Tickle, Breeze, Mellow.. from my archives of yesteryears..



When mellow breeze
Tickled my face and then yours
I know you blushed..

20 comments:

  1. Utterly sweet... endearing.
    Here's Mine:
    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/03/16/lucky-to-call-you-friend/

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  2. Sheilagh Lee said :sweet charming and utterly romantic well done

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  3. Simple and sweet and a moment we can all identify with!

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  4. that is really really sweet

    such a nice piece!

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  5. Cute Haiku RS......and it reminded me of yesteryear heroines from Bollywood movies!! :D

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  6. So hard to hide a blush, nice.

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  7. Wrapped up soooooooooooo nicely :)

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  8. Wonderful.
    A welcomed treat after the night I had.

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  9. I can see that blush so clearly! (I can even feel the burning in my cheeks!)

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  10. Just beautiful.
    You have a most wonderful way of writing so very lightly on the page to create magic.

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  11. the intimacy of a touch between two... beautiful...

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  12. Ah, to be young again and feel a gentle breeze and the warmth of color diffusing across her face... This is so tender and delicate--the perfect haiku.

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  13. Subtle sensual and evocative...I like it.
    Rosie

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  14. I like this one. It is subtle and romantic. I agree. Very interesting Ramesh!
    Noelle

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