Saturday, March 26, 2011

His & Her ..and Moon Haikus for Haiku Heights




Thanks to SiS of FEW MILES for the prompt ..... Hush..


A hush descends on
His heart; hey, who’s it calling
Her name from the past..



and now my Moon Haikus:


A lovely off day,
After a tiring round of Earth
Moon rests in my thoughts…


Stars note his absence,
Talk in hushed voices, don't
Let the Sun know it..



By: RS

19 comments:

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  2. I must say that your "hush" haiku is/are much less intense than mine--which, now that I think of it, is rather mind-numbing. Thanks for stopping by, Ramesh! I always enjoy your visits.

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  3. These haiku's have a voice of one being chased. Your memories are chasing you with a name and sun and moon chase each other. Very nice.

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  4. Pyaara Dost,
    Good Morning!
    After two weeks of hectic work Iam relaxing today!
    Your words added beauty to my lovely moments of the day!
    Wishing you a wonderful day ahead,
    Sasneham,
    Anu

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  5. I particularly like 'Moon rests in my thoughts'. You think the moon is resting, only it doesn't...and the moon is the subject of your thoughts.
    I like the ambiguity of that line.
    Rosie

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  6. perfect all the 3.. though I loved the 1st one the most..

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  7. hello sir,
    I loved the first one very very much! :) It is beautiful and as if his heart beat stills for a second when she calls his name, I can imagine it vividly :)
    Loved reading it sir
    Ananya
    Founder
    http://rawconviviality.blogspot.com

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  8. Wow that was really nice reading..Cute haikus on moon.. Loved the 3rd haiku most :)

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  9. fabulous trio ramesh, each and everyone is beautiful.

    trisha
    http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com/2011/03/28/free-soul-28-3-11/

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  10. Happy Tuesday.

    bless your talent.
    keep sharing.

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  11. I like the alliteration in the first one. I also liked your last lines in all of them.

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  12. perhaps it is his past calling hers.. only to realize the presents entangling is enough for even their future to be together? loved the haiku, RS :)

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  13. Rameshji, wonderful Haikus.. Smiles..

    Someone is Special

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  14. Charming set of Haikus - great takes on the prompts!

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