Saturday, March 26, 2011

His & Her ..and Moon Haikus for Haiku Heights




Thanks to SiS of FEW MILES for the prompt ..... Hush..


A hush descends on
His heart; hey, who’s it calling
Her name from the past..


and now my Moon Haikus:


A lovely off day,
After a tiring round of Earth
Moon rests in my thoughts…


Stars note his absence,
Talk in hushed voices, don't
Let the Sun know it..


By: RS
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19 comments:

  1. Magical Mystical TeacherMarch 26, 2011 at 10:26 AM

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  2. Magical Mystical TeacherMarch 26, 2011 at 10:26 AM

    I must say that your "hush" haiku is/are much less intense than mine--which, now that I think of it, is rather mind-numbing. Thanks for stopping by, Ramesh! I always enjoy your visits.

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  3. ChristineMarch 26, 2011 at 12:22 PM

    These haiku's have a voice of one being chased. Your memories are chasing you with a name and sun and moon chase each other. Very nice.

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  4. anupamaMarch 26, 2011 at 6:51 PM

    Pyaara Dost,
    Good Morning!
    After two weeks of hectic work Iam relaxing today!
    Your words added beauty to my lovely moments of the day!
    Wishing you a wonderful day ahead,
    Sasneham,
    Anu

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  5. Aayushi MehtaMarch 26, 2011 at 10:20 PM

    Nice Haikus.

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  6. Kodjo DeynooMarch 27, 2011 at 5:32 AM

    Yes a very nice haiku

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  7. Rosie@travel-i-talesMarch 27, 2011 at 6:12 AM

    I particularly like 'Moon rests in my thoughts'. You think the moon is resting, only it doesn't...and the moon is the subject of your thoughts.
    I like the ambiguity of that line.
    Rosie

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  8. Celestial DreamzMarch 27, 2011 at 9:05 AM

    Loved reading. :)

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  9. Priyanka BhowmickMarch 27, 2011 at 9:22 AM

    perfect all the 3.. though I loved the 1st one the most..

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  10. SpreeMarch 27, 2011 at 10:07 PM

    hello sir,
    I loved the first one very very much! :) It is beautiful and as if his heart beat stills for a second when she calls his name, I can imagine it vividly :)
    Loved reading it sir
    Ananya
    Founder
    http://rawconviviality.blogspot.com

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  11. Madeleine Begun KaneMarch 28, 2011 at 12:44 AM

    I enjoyed each haiku very much!

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  12. SayaMarch 28, 2011 at 5:32 AM

    Wow that was really nice reading..Cute haikus on moon.. Loved the 3rd haiku most :)

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  13. trishaMarch 28, 2011 at 7:38 AM

    fabulous trio ramesh, each and everyone is beautiful.

    trisha
    http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com/2011/03/28/free-soul-28-3-11/

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  14. AnonymousMarch 29, 2011 at 10:38 AM

    incredible Hakus..

    you rock.

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  15. JingleMarch 29, 2011 at 10:38 AM

    Happy Tuesday.

    bless your talent.
    keep sharing.

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  16. spiritsoflenaMarch 29, 2011 at 1:58 PM

    I like the alliteration in the first one. I also liked your last lines in all of them.

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  17. Vinay Leo R.March 31, 2011 at 10:16 AM

    perhaps it is his past calling hers.. only to realize the presents entangling is enough for even their future to be together? loved the haiku, RS :)

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  18. Someone is SpecialApril 2, 2011 at 1:25 AM

    Rameshji, wonderful Haikus.. Smiles..

    Someone is Special

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  19. AnonymousApril 2, 2011 at 1:59 PM

    Charming set of Haikus - great takes on the prompts!

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