Wednesday, March 30, 2011

You Are Anyway Persuasive....


Written for 3WW : Loud, Persuasive,Riches


a HAIKU....


Bestowed by riches

Don’t be loud, you are anyway

Persuasive, yes!



by: RS
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16 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 30, 2011 at 3:59 AM

    Interesting :)
    It's important to remember and not be loud about your riches :)

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  2. Kodjo DeynooMarch 30, 2011 at 4:10 AM

    I like what you did here
    And so much said with just few words loud

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  3. Jae RoseMarch 30, 2011 at 4:33 AM

    A nice return to your brilliant hiakus Ramesh..you tell a story and leave us with questions using so few words..great! Jae

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  4. Uma AnandaneMarch 30, 2011 at 5:40 AM

    Its like a dialogue..yes.Nice one

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  5. RenMarch 30, 2011 at 5:54 AM

    So very true. Enjoyed this :)

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  6. anthonynorthMarch 30, 2011 at 7:21 AM

    Yes, riches can be so gaudy with some.

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  7. Sheilagh LeeMarch 30, 2011 at 8:45 AM

    Sheilagh Lee said: a story told in few sentences great haiku

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  8. UnknownMarch 30, 2011 at 9:15 AM

    You've made me wonder...

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  9. AltonianMarch 30, 2011 at 11:58 AM

    The clean purity of line and rythmn in your haikus always leaves me amazed. This one is a beautiful way of saying - Don't boast.

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  10. AnonymousMarch 30, 2011 at 2:33 PM

    nice thought ! well made haiku :)

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  11. ShailMarch 30, 2011 at 9:04 PM

    Anyway persuasive, why be loud too? Beautifully said in so few words!

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  12. Thom GabrukiewiczMarch 31, 2011 at 8:47 AM

    well said.

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  13. Short PoemsMarch 31, 2011 at 2:05 PM

    Very well said, enjoyed it very much :)
    Have a great weekend ahead, Ramesh

    Warmly
    Marinela

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  14. ms pieMarch 31, 2011 at 6:58 PM

    life can be so wonderfully deceiving...

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  15. trishaApril 2, 2011 at 12:08 AM

    this haiku is a jewel Ramesh- wow! its wise and true and just lovely.

    trisha
    http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com

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  16. JP/debApril 2, 2011 at 7:51 PM

    enjoyed this Ramesh!

    JP~deborah

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