Friday, April 1, 2011

See, I Made You Smile..




Written for Haiku My Heart..

See I Made You Smile..


Old man makes a face
Little baby giggles, hey,
See, I made you smile

Keep smiling, read on
Now baby makes a face and
Child in old giggles

I sit and watch them
In the blankness of white wall
Dad's gone, I am grey

Yes, it's first April
Yet one more year gone, thank God
I didn't grow up..

10 comments:

  1. The first link doesn't work, Ramesh. But yes, with this you made me smile.

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  2. This did make me smile. Very wide, actually ! Enjoy your sweet special day !

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  3. 'Child' inside everyone needs to be taken care of, lest he loses his innocence while growing up.
    Lovely Haikus. :-)
    Thanks for stopping by!

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  4. so tender...this progression of life.
    this seeing the faces of love. could be any culture, any time...
    the smile of a father to his child.
    the passage of time and cherishing of love.
    the willingness to keep our innocence alive!

    beautiful ramesh thank you for gracing my heart.

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  5. This was nice, Ramesh. Thanks.

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  6. Very charming, Ramesh, and at the the same time poignant. For just a moment, the narrator feels regret, loss, but then he bounces back, "Thank God I didn't grow up!" We can't have those times anymore, maybe, but we can have these times! Thank you for the message!

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  7. children and pets can always make us laugh.

    i love the company of small children, esp below five- they are so pure and loving :) and of course very funny.

    trisha
    http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com

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  8. Childlike innocence,
    becomingly beautiful,
    grow younger each day!

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  9. It is beautiful Ramesh. This makes me think of Wordsworth line, The child is father of the man. Beautiful haikus about the delight one takes in childish things and playfulness.
    Noelle

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