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Monday, April 25, 2011
Flame of candle flickers
Just for the 'Haiku' of it.....
Flame of candle flickers Can’t even handle my soft breath Why to get closer..
Brain says let it glow at a distance then, at list there will be light... going closer may blow it out, but the heart says... go closer, it makes me breathe... :) :)
Ah, yes. The tension in this poem is palpable.
ReplyDeleteYou nervous? Never!
ReplyDeleteAnother nice one from you, Ramesh.
just loved it ramesh. its so true.
ReplyDeleteThe candle though emitting light, still am scared of it, to get closer!
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ReplyDeleteBrain says let it glow at a distance then, at list there will be light... going closer may blow it out, but the heart says... go closer, it makes me breathe... :) :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful sir :)
Regards