Monday, April 11, 2011

Haiku for Jingle's Poetry Potluck..



My Moon Haiku for Jingle's Poetry Potluck..

Theme:  Survival

Moon smiles, doesn’t fear
Extinction like Earth, none has
Inhabited yet..



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Heart quakes , sunami
Attacks shores of eyes, dreams sink
 I survive to smile..



by: RS :)




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9 comments:

  1. bendedspoonApril 11, 2011 at 7:20 AM

    I love that moon smile! Hopefully we won't go back there and make it cry :)

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  2. adithyasaravanaApril 11, 2011 at 10:18 AM

    fantastic.. the second one is simple and packed with emotions..

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  3. AnonymousApril 11, 2011 at 11:41 AM

    good message and great thoughts ramesh.. mines here~ http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/06/18/natures-gravity/

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  4. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallApril 11, 2011 at 12:46 PM

    wow,

    survive to smile,
    so cool sentiments.

    superb Haikus.

    A++

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  5. Rashmirekha MannaApril 12, 2011 at 8:45 AM

    Liked the metaphor :)

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  6. Madeleine Begun KaneApril 13, 2011 at 12:13 AM

    Both are lovely. I especially like the first.

    And thanks so much for participating in this week's Limerick-Off!

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  7. Hyde Park Poetry PalaceApril 13, 2011 at 12:28 PM

    Awards for you, thanks for the support!

    bless your day.

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  8. SaugraamzindagiApril 14, 2011 at 8:54 AM

    Brilliant Haikus, Ramesh.

    Unique perception. :-)

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  9. KayApril 16, 2011 at 11:19 PM

    I enjoyed this haiku very much and appreciate your sharing it. Have a lovely day.

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