Wednesday, April 6, 2011

Peculiar of Moon




Written for 3 WW..  prompts: Adamant, Peculiar, Fabricate..




Peculiar of Moon
Keeps on smiling, adamant,
Fabricates reasons

Fabricates reasons
Either to return or give
A smile just like that




Ha, Ha, if you wish to replace Moon with Heart.... do it.. thanks for visiting all of you and some tough prompts..ThomG!!




By: RS :)



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12 comments:

  1. Jae RoseApril 6, 2011 at 9:17 AM

    The moon seems perfect - I can imagine it smiling like your face..Jae :)

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  2. anthonynorthApril 6, 2011 at 10:27 AM

    Enjoyable, both :-)

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  3. AltonianApril 6, 2011 at 10:40 AM

    I'll stick with moon - it was your first thought, and they are usually the best. Liked 'em!

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  4. anupamaApril 6, 2011 at 11:20 AM

    Pyaara Dost,
    Good Evening!
    A smile like the moon............interesting...a heart filled with love and care can bring that mesmersing smile on one;s face!
    Good thought,dost!
    Wishing you a dreamy night.
    Sasneham,
    Anu

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  5. Sheilagh LeeApril 6, 2011 at 12:44 PM

    sheilagh lee said:lovely moon

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  6. DeborahApril 6, 2011 at 12:50 PM

    I loved this and the moon fitted perfectly!

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  7. LisaApril 6, 2011 at 7:03 PM

    Ramesh - that is a lovely post. Not sure which way I like better.

    Lisa
    InspiredbyLisa

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  8. maglomaniacApril 6, 2011 at 9:55 PM

    Hi Ramesh,
    Smiling,adamant.
    Powerful.Loved it.
    it has been a long time since I came to blogging world.
    And my wish to meet you might not get fulfilled.
    I was quite busy with my job and then with CAT.I am finally leaving Pune 0n 10th for joining a B school.
    Hope to be in touch with your creations.

    ~Harsha

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  9. trishaApril 7, 2011 at 5:24 AM

    this is very beautiful ramesh. lovely, dreamy take on the prompt.

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  10. SaugraamzindagiApril 7, 2011 at 8:07 AM

    What I liked about this post is the way you used these tough sounding words in a positive stride and could come up with something really lighthearted.
    I guess that's the way you find happiness in everything. :-)

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  11. Marinela RekaApril 7, 2011 at 10:05 AM

    That is a lovely, Ramesh
    Enjoyed them both :)

    Short Poems

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  12. trishaApril 8, 2011 at 9:10 PM

    thats why i love nature. :)

    trisha
    http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/04/08/the-visitor-for-3ww/

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