Thursday, April 7, 2011

Hi ... Haikus.. for Haiku My Heart..


Haiku My Heart.... a bit early today..



A haggard looking
Stranger knocks at my door,
I don't open it...



Big knock on door of
My mind, a negative thought,
Should  I open it..



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A crow dives, touches my
Head, for some a bad omen
For me a blessing..





By: RS
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14 comments:

  1. Amanda MooreApril 7, 2011 at 5:35 PM

    it is always good when we turn bad omens into blessing! Hey Ramesh I just read you had a birthday on the 1st, I just want to wish you happy belated birthday!

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  2. trishaApril 8, 2011 at 7:25 AM

    beautiful trio ramesh. all three are thought provoking. :)

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  3. rebeccaApril 8, 2011 at 8:50 AM

    thank you ramesh for your positive place here among us.
    i imagine you would open the door,
    and help this stranger
    find warmth, comfort and transform!

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  4. adithyasaravanaApril 8, 2011 at 9:02 AM

    nice post,
    i've been following your blog for quite sometime..
    and your poems are amazing..

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  5. AnonymousApril 8, 2011 at 9:20 AM

    I enjoy your story telling in this haiku format.

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  6. MeriApril 8, 2011 at 9:24 AM

    I'll join in Amanda's belated birthday wishes. . . and offer you blessings.

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  7. Ramesh SoodApril 8, 2011 at 9:26 AM

    Thank you Amanda and Meri..for your blessings and wishes.. I feel so happy..

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  8. Marilyn & JeffApril 8, 2011 at 12:11 PM

    Ah, the knock on the door on your mind. I experience these - usually it's because I have negative thoughts about myself! I enjoyed you haiku sets, all positive.

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  9. SpadomanApril 8, 2011 at 2:18 PM

    Always wonder who is on the phone or at the door. I sometimes don't answer it too.
    The crow is a blessing as are all God's creations.
    very good stuff.

    Peace

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  10. Margaret PangertApril 8, 2011 at 3:10 PM

    Hi Ramesh~ How wonderful that you overcame your fears and opened the door to a crow touching your head! The crow is a blessing and is your totem animal. To get so close, he must have been giving you a message. I love how you told this complete story in haiku form. It's amazing! And happy belated birthday! Love, Margaret

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  11. UnknownApril 8, 2011 at 4:00 PM

    The crow was knocking on your head too. You let him in I think.

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  12. gmaApril 8, 2011 at 7:15 PM

    Open the door to the stranger.
    Do not let the negative thought in.
    Learn from the crow.

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  13. foxysueApril 9, 2011 at 2:09 AM

    We've lived on our cottage for ten years now, a family of crows lived here before us, having built our cottage they proceeded to peck at the new paint around the windows, actually nearly all the wood was well chipped into. They used to wake us up at some unearthly hour chipping away, I would dash downstairs to scare them off.

    We started to feed the crows in wintertime. They stopped the chipping, we took this as acceptance of us! We notice them preparing for nesting and now we welcome their young. I'm glad we made friends!

    Befriending our negative mind and saying all's well, the stranger will soon be soothed and his haggard face will smooth over!

    Love Sue x

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  14. JMApril 9, 2011 at 5:48 AM

    beautiful words. i have to reread these to ensure that I got as much out of it as possible.
    These triplet of stanzas were brilliant

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