Wednesday, April 20, 2011

I Knead Words Softly.. .




Written for 3WW... Knead, Cleanse, Melt



Candle’s melting wax
I try to knead, sticks on hands
Cleansing hurts...no.. oops!


Had to knead my mind for this haiku.. hope you smiled...to hear cry of  sudden pain.... ha, ha...   but then what had come spontaneously is here....


I knead words softly
Thoughts melt and flow on paper
Mind cleanses itself




RS  : )





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19 comments:

  1. Jae RoseApril 20, 2011 at 6:51 AM

    Yes, you do 'knead words softly'..and each little word sculpture is a treasure..Jae

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  2. rmpWritingsApril 20, 2011 at 7:04 AM

    the first did make me smile. the second was beautifully said.

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  3. ChrisApril 20, 2011 at 7:32 AM

    I also agree with RmpWritings, love the flow of words in the second one. Brilliant. Cheers.

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  4. anthonynorthApril 20, 2011 at 7:35 AM

    Enjoyed both, but the second was best.

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  5. adithyasaravanaApril 20, 2011 at 9:12 AM

    absolutely amazing...I've heard of weaving words.. now this kneading words is excellent..

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  6. Rashmirekha MannaApril 20, 2011 at 9:52 AM

    Thoughts melt and flow on paper :)

    What could have resulted in the melting

    Warmth of the words and that of love warms the heart and the emotions ooze out, through the eyes, warm, flowing; some dry on the cheeks; some twinkle in the eyes, the rest flow on paper :)


    Regards

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  7. Rashmirekha MannaApril 20, 2011 at 9:56 AM

    And yes I have written something on a lighter vein... :) though not very inspiring... would be obliged if you could spare a few moments :) :)

    http://heartspeakrm.blogspot.com/2011/04/would-he-be-as-mad.html


    Regards

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  8. Mixed..FeelingsApril 20, 2011 at 10:21 AM

    Second one was really beautiful :)

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  9. VL SheridanApril 20, 2011 at 10:35 AM

    "Knead words softly". What a beautiful image! Great poem!

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  10. AltonianApril 20, 2011 at 10:38 AM

    Both excellent examples of your art, but the second one did it for me.

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  11. NicoleApril 20, 2011 at 10:42 AM

    These are lovely. The second is a stroke of genius.

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  12. Sheilagh LeeApril 20, 2011 at 11:04 AM

    Lovely isn't that we all do knead words but you express it so beautifully,

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  13. UnknownApril 20, 2011 at 4:48 PM

    I relate to and adore the second piece.

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  14. Margaret PangertApril 20, 2011 at 6:16 PM

    Nice, Ramesh~ Both of these speak to me through imagery... the pain of kneading the molten candle wax; the emotional pain soothed by kneading words softly in a journal.

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  15. SandyCarlsonApril 20, 2011 at 7:03 PM

    You have me smiling!

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  16. Anya PadyamApril 20, 2011 at 7:11 PM

    Nice haikus - but the second one was just amazing!!! Really lovely...

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  17. trishaApril 21, 2011 at 7:17 AM

    both are beautiful and the second one is fabulous.

    ha. "just someone" said what i wanted to say. :)

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  18. ShailApril 21, 2011 at 11:28 AM

    Both are wonderful :) Yes, I heard you say ouch when I read the first one!

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  19. J Cosmo NewberyApril 24, 2011 at 11:27 PM

    I like the second one best!

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