Thursday, July 26, 2012

I Am With Myself...


Written for Rebbeca's
Haiku My Heart..



I Am With Myself..


I look straight and reach
where magical green meets grey;
Ah, white flowers bloom

Ah, white flowers bloom,
tree holds the bunch pretty tight;
strong winds come laughing

Strong winds come laughing
as I find raindrops wash my face;
Eyes close on their own

Eyes close on their own
as rain gains ferocious speed;
No, I don't see red

No, I don't see red
happy colours shine in black;
world has vanished..

World has vanished;
fully drenched in water
I am with myself..

I am with myself;
oh, please God let me be here
melting with the rain..


RS:)


12 comments:

  1. Lovely words, echoing like the drops of rain :-)

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  2. What a beautiful prayer. Descriptive to the point of being able to see with your eyes closed. Wonderful!


    Peace

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  3. I look forward every week to your cascading haiku. They are really, really good!

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  4. Cascading, your haiku, like the rain :) Lovely.

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  5. A beautiful welcome of the rain!

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  6. this....
    "I am with myself;
    oh, please God let me be here
    melting with the rain"

    made the sun rise in my heart all over again!

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  7. beautiful Ramesh, this prayer, this rain falling with your words and haiku...

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  8. Beautiful writings as always ~ a treasure ~~ thanks, namaste, (A Creative Harbor)

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  9. Wow.
    Beautifully spiritual.

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  10. Awesome series Ramesh, you're really "The King" of the cascading haiku. Lovely read, well done.

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  11. I melted with this rain RS :) :)

    Beautiful...

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