Saturday, July 21, 2012

Ah, Success!!!.



Written for OSI

Thanks to Gautami Tripathy

Prompt : Niche

Ah, success!!!

Use and throw -
his niche to climb up;
lonely top

Lonely top;
he wears many masks
happily

Happily;
old mirror knows all
so does he

So does he
about each dark spot 
ah, success

ah, success
his niche to climb up-
use and throw..


RS:)


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11 comments:

  1. Amrit SinhaJuly 22, 2012 at 7:37 AM

    Quite a nice one :-)

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  2. anthonynorthJuly 22, 2012 at 9:17 AM

    And an excellent niche here.

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  3. Lisa at GreenbowJuly 22, 2012 at 12:00 PM

    Like this series of haiku one goes up and up the ladder of success.

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  4. AnonymousJuly 22, 2012 at 1:43 PM

    true words!

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  5. totomaiJuly 23, 2012 at 5:38 AM

    felt like going up and down and throwing everything after :-)

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  6. Sri ValliJuly 23, 2012 at 10:28 AM

    Lovely lines...

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  7. AnonymousJuly 23, 2012 at 11:58 AM

    you have been tagged...

    http://palabradiminuta.blogspot.com/

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  8. J Cosmo NewberyJuly 23, 2012 at 2:47 PM

    Very clever, in a roundabout way!

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  9. The Write GirlJuly 23, 2012 at 8:00 PM

    Every verse is woven in so perfectly. Nicely writen Ramesh.

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  10. Harshad MehtaJuly 24, 2012 at 2:02 AM

    Very well said. Mirror knows everything!

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  11. surinder nathJuly 26, 2012 at 1:31 AM

    How Lyrical and so refreshing.A Romantic poet in the modern Age!

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