Monday, September 16, 2013

A Long Wait Ahead - Haiku


Haiku Heights #290 ~
September Heights
Day 17 ~ Dread


He would always
dread her departure;
lo! he departs

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Oh, she dreads
a long wait ahead;
meeting point


RS:)

12 comments:

  1. No. 1 - that's sad. :(....communication is so key!

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    1. I apologise for the double comment. I'd wanted to say in the previous one that I really like both your takes on this theme. :)

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  2. I'm leaving in 2 days Ramesh, but also come back, so God wants.

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  3. A long wait is always dreadful. Nice Haiku.

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  4. Time stands still,when we wait for a dear one.

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  5. Beautiful...departing and waiting is tough, and it brings solitude which is dreadful!!
    Well written, Ramesh. :)

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  6. Loved both of it...
    And 1st one is so awesome :)

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