Monday, September 16, 2013

A Long Wait Ahead - Haiku


Haiku Heights #290 ~
September Heights
Day 17 ~ Dread


He would always
dread her departure;
lo! he departs

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Oh, she dreads
a long wait ahead;
meeting point


RS:)
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12 comments:

  1. William RhosyrSeptember 16, 2013 at 8:34 PM

    Beautiful! Thank you!

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 16, 2013 at 8:41 PM

    ah the waiting...

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  3. SongSeptember 16, 2013 at 10:17 PM

    No. 1 - that's sad. :(....communication is so key!

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    1. SongSeptember 16, 2013 at 10:18 PM

      I apologise for the double comment. I'd wanted to say in the previous one that I really like both your takes on this theme. :)

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  4. Angelika PoeSeptember 16, 2013 at 10:23 PM

    I'm leaving in 2 days Ramesh, but also come back, so God wants.

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  5. kalpana solsiSeptember 16, 2013 at 11:32 PM

    A long wait is always dreadful. Nice Haiku.

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  6. UnknownSeptember 16, 2013 at 11:54 PM

    Time stands still,when we wait for a dear one.

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  7. PanchaliSeptember 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM

    Beautiful...departing and waiting is tough, and it brings solitude which is dreadful!!
    Well written, Ramesh. :)

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  8. Sumana RoySeptember 17, 2013 at 2:21 AM


    great take on the prompt....

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  9. LocomenteSeptember 17, 2013 at 4:00 AM

    Loved both of it...
    And 1st one is so awesome :)

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  10. AnonymousSeptember 17, 2013 at 5:44 AM

    simply great, Ramesh!

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  11. rallentandaSeptember 17, 2013 at 6:18 AM

    Enigmatic.

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