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Thursday, September 26, 2013
Her Smiles Splattered ...Haiku
Haiku Heights #300 ~
September Heights
Day 27 ~ Gold
Shared with Rebecca's Haiku My Heart..
Dry leaf;
innocent tree
sheds gold
**
Sunrise;
dancing waves
gleam gold
**
Wall paper of
golden flowers in the room;
her smiles splattered
I like the economy of words in these haiku. The first is is particularly exceptional.
ReplyDeleteThe first two haiku deals with Nature is soothing.
ReplyDeleteThe first two - What imagery, sir!
ReplyDeleteTruth be told, I've read them thrice already.
The simplicity and economy of the first one is wonderful.
ReplyDeleteI agree - the simplicity of the first is gold itself!
ReplyDeleteThe first one is so simple, but so grand, says so much about the fall. I enjoyed this set.
ReplyDeleteA splattered smile? ;)
ReplyDeleteSalmon, Blue and Gold
very beautifully done.
ReplyDeletetouching words
ReplyDeleteexcellent
The last one is gorgeous...just gorgeous!
ReplyDeleteAll three are stunners, in very different ways.
ReplyDeletegolden all,
ReplyDeletejust like you!