Tuesday, September 3, 2013

Her Laughter: Haiku..



Haiku Heights #277

September Heights
Day 04 ~ Shepherd




Shepherd runs
after his astray sheep;
her laughter

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Her laughter;
shepherd turns to look back,
loses sheep
 

RS:)
 
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17 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 3, 2013 at 12:25 PM

    Nice humour here!

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 3, 2013 at 12:44 PM

    Excellent!

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  3. kaykualaSeptember 3, 2013 at 4:51 PM

    Chuckles! That's the shepherd's lot! Nicely Ramesh!

    Hank

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  4. JiggyasaSeptember 3, 2013 at 8:54 PM

    this was really a cute one..no literally!!!

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  5. kalpana solsiSeptember 3, 2013 at 9:07 PM

    Was the laughter a mirage ? but the poor shepherd lost his sheep in the bargain. Lovely haiku.

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  6. rallentandaSeptember 3, 2013 at 9:49 PM

    Now there is a lesson here...women can be a terrible distraction:)

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  7. AnonymousSeptember 3, 2013 at 11:26 PM

    I like the first half best.

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  8. PanchaliSeptember 4, 2013 at 12:53 AM

    Oh....that was evil laughter. Smiles...
    Lovely!

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  9. AnonymousSeptember 4, 2013 at 3:02 AM

    clever :) thanks for the grin.

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  10. rudraprayagaSeptember 4, 2013 at 3:15 AM

    Both are impressive.

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  11. AnonymousSeptember 4, 2013 at 4:58 AM

    very nice cascade

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  12. LocomenteSeptember 4, 2013 at 8:50 AM

    It brought a smile in my face sir...
    Liked a lot!

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  13. JazzbumpaSeptember 4, 2013 at 10:59 AM

    priorities

    Cheers!
    JzB

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  14. Gaurang RaoSeptember 4, 2013 at 11:44 AM

    Haha! Beautiful!

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  15. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 4, 2013 at 7:39 PM

    A careless shepherd? Can it be?

    Shepherd Calls

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  16. AnonymousSeptember 4, 2013 at 11:07 PM

    This so charming and playful love it!

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  17. asteria's canvassSeptember 5, 2013 at 11:48 AM

    Awwww thats a very cute take on the prompt... :)

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