Thursday, September 5, 2013

I See Dry leaf Fall.. Haiku



Haiku Heights #279

September Heights
Day 06 ~ TEACHER

I See Dry leaf Fall.


Strong angry winds
lash out at the tall tree;
I learn to bow

**

lessons from nature
scattered all around me;
I bow to pick

**

Ah, nature doesn't
force her teachings ever;
I see dry leaf fall


RS:)

14 comments:

  1. Learning to bow in life is a great humbling experience . Looooved the first one

    ReplyDelete
  2. I think these work really well - the first one especially.

    ReplyDelete
  3. Hi - RS ... you take nature as a teacher, this is a very nice idea ...

    it greets Geli

    ReplyDelete
  4. A very different take...
    And this teacher called nature will teach only if we observe...
    Wonderful!!!

    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2013/09/first-teacher.html

    ReplyDelete
  5. Learning to submit to nature instead of conquering..interesting concept of nature as the teacher.

    ReplyDelete
  6. What a powerful teacher nature is. Good poems.

    http://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2013/09/06/freedoms-school/

    ReplyDelete
  7. Nature never tells. Nature always shows.

    I love the 2nd haiku the best especially the 3rd line. "I bow to pick" can be taken two ways.

    Lovely!

    ReplyDelete

  8. like all three......and i agree with Lolly..

    ReplyDelete
  9. Yes ! Nature is the teacher I bow before too!

    ReplyDelete
  10. Only if we understand these lessons taught to us by the nature.
    an ignorant child
    nature's library around
    busy picking nose

    ReplyDelete
  11. So meaningful and well written
    thank you
    Peace
    Siggi

    ReplyDelete