Saturday, January 4, 2014

Clap, clap, clap, clap, clap.. Haiku




Prompt: Clap



He thanks and applauds
seeing the prompt for the haiku;
clap, clap, clap, clap, clap

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 Haiku
ah, monkey stuns her
snatching away her popcorn;
another one claps
another one claps;
ah, ancestors celebrate 
 their small victory 

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clap, clap, clap, clap, clap;
he hears you too do the same 
reading his haiku

Aha,
thanks a lot!!
clap, clap..


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RS:)

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11 comments:

  1. Aayesha S HakimJanuary 5, 2014 at 12:15 AM

    lovely sir :)

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  2. Englepappa/ Ole JNJanuary 5, 2014 at 1:24 AM

    Nice haiku! And a funny twist with all the clapping... I like it!

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  3. Jyotsna BhatiaJanuary 5, 2014 at 4:16 AM

    haha.. monkey twist ?? Who would have thought ..

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  4. Sumana RoyJanuary 5, 2014 at 8:48 AM

    nice storyline... :D

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  5. kalpana solsiJanuary 5, 2014 at 10:35 AM

    ancestors celebrate their small victory. loved this one.

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  6. AnonymousJanuary 5, 2014 at 10:58 AM

    Ramesh, we indeed are on the same wave length!

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  7. LocomenteJanuary 5, 2014 at 9:17 PM

    I enjoyed reading this sir!

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  8. ReshmaJanuary 6, 2014 at 5:43 PM

    clap clap clap, nicely done RS:)

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  9. LmkazmierczakJanuary 7, 2014 at 1:26 AM

    Am new to Haiku...had not thought to color code and mix the fonts...you've inspired me♪ Still wishing Happy 2014! http://lauriekazmierczak.com/taking-flight/

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  10. UnknownJanuary 8, 2014 at 9:05 AM

    Wao. What a humorous twist. Loved it :)

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  11. Milan RajkumarJanuary 9, 2014 at 12:39 PM

    nice one !

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