Sunday, January 12, 2014

His Teasing Laughter -- Haiku





Grimace

His Teasing Laughter..


Her warmth turns
into a cold expression;
a strange aroma

A strange aroma;
he doesn't like watching
a grimacing moon

a grimacing moon;
truth hides behind a
cover of fog...

Cover of fog;
 she gropes in dark hearing
his teasing laughter

His teasing laughter;
ah, she decides to trust 
her spotless mirror

( Hope each haiku stands on its own too)

RS:)





17 comments:

  1. Excellent collection. i've missed your haiku while I've been away.

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  2. A lovely bouquet , each flower spreading its own fragrance.

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  3. Great set! And yes each stands nicely on it's own.

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  4. Nice haiku, both together and each by themselves!

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  5. I loved all of them...especially how you ended it :) here's my take
    http://apurvakj.wordpress.com/2014/01/13/grimace-haiku/

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  6. Wonderful cascade. But no teasing her in the future. ;-)

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  7. A wonderful way to bind all the flowers into a nice bouquet :-)..

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  8. This is a lovely collection of haiku. I like how they tell a story as they go. ♥

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  9. Nice set of Haiku, all together and also each one on its own.

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  10. I'm sure that I wouldn't want to watch a grimacing moon very long either. I can think of much more pleasant sights!

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  11. Wonderful series of linked haiku telling a sad story x

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  12. Hi Ramesh. You are invited to Ralls Rollin On Heights next week. Hope to see you there.

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  13. You've out done yourself Ramesh, enjoyed this immensely :)

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  14. Beautiful set of haiku, all stand-alones.

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