Grimace
His Teasing Laughter..
Her warmth turns
into a cold expression;
a strange aroma
A strange aroma;
he doesn't like watching
a grimacing moon
a grimacing moon;
truth hides behind a
cover of fog...
Cover of fog;
she gropes in dark hearing
his teasing laughter
His teasing laughter;
ah, she decides to trust
her spotless mirror
( Hope each haiku stands on its own too)
RS:)
Excellent collection. i've missed your haiku while I've been away.
ReplyDeleteA lovely bouquet , each flower spreading its own fragrance.
ReplyDeleteGreat set! And yes each stands nicely on it's own.
ReplyDeleteNice haiku, both together and each by themselves!
ReplyDeleteI loved all of them...especially how you ended it :) here's my take
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You do the cascades so well!
ReplyDeleteWonderful cascade. But no teasing her in the future. ;-)
ReplyDeleteA wonderful way to bind all the flowers into a nice bouquet :-)..
ReplyDeleteThis is a lovely collection of haiku. I like how they tell a story as they go. ♥
ReplyDeleteNice set of Haiku, all together and also each one on its own.
ReplyDeleteI'm sure that I wouldn't want to watch a grimacing moon very long either. I can think of much more pleasant sights!
ReplyDeleteWonderful series of linked haiku telling a sad story x
ReplyDeleteHi Ramesh. You are invited to Ralls Rollin On Heights next week. Hope to see you there.
ReplyDeleteWonderfully crafted tale RS
ReplyDeleteYou've out done yourself Ramesh, enjoyed this immensely :)
ReplyDeletelove the sequels !
ReplyDeleteBeautiful set of haiku, all stand-alones.
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