Anxious, Devoted, Scrawny..
Shared with Haiku Heights..for Grimace.. the last Haiku...too...
River of Light Flows..
scrawny off-spring and
anxious, devoted mom;
oh, world is so cold..
Oh, world is so cold;
snow covers the scrawny tree
and my words shiver
And my words shiver,
I look for the warmth of Moon;
river of light flows
River of light flows
yet grimace on her face;
ah, scrawny off-spring
RS:)
I look for the warmth of Moon;
ReplyDeleteriver of light flows
Some lights are welcomed in the cold! Wonderful cascades Ramesh!
Hank
Sometimes light is not enough to wrap up the world and keep it safe..still always worth seeing it though..
ReplyDeletebeautiful done
ReplyDeleteNice progression...enjoyed your river of words♪ http://lauriekazmierczak.com/transformation/
ReplyDeletenice haiku set...loved the words- 'river of light'
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the raw and vivid imagery and narrative of this haiku set. Exceptional. :-)
ReplyDeleteluv the circular pattern of your haiku sequence; Have a nice Saturday;
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Warmth of the moon.! An original thought. enjoyed reading it.
ReplyDeletelove it !
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