Friday, January 17, 2014

Oh, My Words Shiver.. Haiku


Haiku My Heart



Oh, My Words Shiver..


Oh, my words shiver,
I look for the warmth of Moon;
river of light flows...

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River of light flows;
dry leafs quietly sheds 
a white sheet of snow

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A white sheet of snow,
I try to carve a haiku;
oh, my words shiver...


RS:)

I took the first one from the chain of haiku I wrote for 3WW...

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10 comments:

  1. peggy gattoJanuary 17, 2014 at 10:45 AM

    Words shiver opens many thoughts!!!

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  2. anthonynorthJanuary 17, 2014 at 1:06 PM

    Enjoyed them - especially the last.

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  3. AnonymousJanuary 17, 2014 at 1:21 PM

    The second one is gorgeous! What a vivid picture I got of the cascading snow!

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  4. J CJanuary 17, 2014 at 2:11 PM

    Nice poetry! I bet last night's full moon inspired you??

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  5. Gillena CoxJanuary 17, 2014 at 2:28 PM

    nicely crafted; have a nice Friday

    much love..

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  6. A Bit of the BlarneyJanuary 17, 2014 at 4:05 PM

    I always enjoy the progression of your haiku!! This is especially vivid today as the temp outside is 20 degrees!!!! Have a grand weekend! Cathy

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  7. Lisa at GreenbowJanuary 17, 2014 at 7:12 PM

    Shivering words are splendid.

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  8. LauraJanuary 18, 2014 at 5:49 AM

    Your words wrap around themselves beautifully Ramesh… may their warmth comfort the shivering.

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  9. तिलक राज कपूरJanuary 18, 2014 at 7:20 AM

    That's the power of being short and precise.

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  10. Magical Mystical TeacherJanuary 18, 2014 at 11:07 AM

    A shivering word is MUCH better than a dead word, my friend! ;)

    Seven Spirits

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