Monday, January 20, 2014

Time Takes a Sharp Turn.. Haiku




Prompt:  Sharp




Time takes a sharp turn;
he stumbles, yet stronger she 
holds him in her thoughts 


RS:)




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16 comments:

  1. kalpana solsiJanuary 20, 2014 at 9:34 AM

    virtual support? lovely haiku.

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  2. anthonynorthJanuary 20, 2014 at 12:12 PM

    Those thoughts are so important. Nice one.

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  3. rallentandaJanuary 20, 2014 at 8:52 PM

    It's a mistake. She should not!

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    1. Ramesh SoodJanuary 20, 2014 at 9:40 PM

      right or wrong
      to each as per his, her own;
      perceptions

      RS:)

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  4. UnknownJanuary 20, 2014 at 11:16 PM

    Great haiku... :)

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  5. J Cosmo NewberyJanuary 21, 2014 at 1:25 AM

    My mind is frisky - I read read 'thoughts' as 'thighs'.

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    1. Ramesh SoodJanuary 21, 2014 at 3:01 AM

      Its your mind.. you will read what you want.. and that's OK..

      RS

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  6. ManiparnaJanuary 21, 2014 at 7:40 AM

    Our thoughts are even faster than the speed of light. Nice lines..:-)

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  7. UnknownJanuary 21, 2014 at 9:21 AM

    Nicely done.

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  8. AnonymousJanuary 21, 2014 at 3:58 PM

    well done.

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  9. AnonymousJanuary 21, 2014 at 10:19 PM

    Beautifully put. Marie

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  10. Milan RajkumarJanuary 21, 2014 at 11:50 PM

    beautiful !

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  11. Aayesha S HakimJanuary 22, 2014 at 8:21 AM

    nicely done! :)

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  12. UnknownJanuary 23, 2014 at 5:04 AM

    Nice one ! She gives him moral support.

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  13. Magical Mystical TeacherJanuary 23, 2014 at 7:41 AM

    I feel as though I am taking a sharp turn with the stumbler!

    Raking Sharp Shadows

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  14. LmkazmierczakJanuary 23, 2014 at 3:50 PM

    Pointedly positive♪ Nicely done! http://lauriekazmierczak.com/look-sharp/

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