My First Haiku
Colourful fields
Flowers chase butterflies
Trees around laugh
And the second one:
In dreamy fields
Shingles turn into stars
under moonlight
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"Words fly like colourful kites on Haiku Heights "
"One single Impression.. I feel emboldened to give my thoughts expression"
"Three Words Wednesday.. lets the poet in me, with words, play"
I liked the first one more. :)
ReplyDeleteNice first tries! Saying a lot with very little. That's the trick.
ReplyDeleteA perfect connect.. nature and words
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ReplyDeletepyaara dost,
ReplyDeleteGood Evening!
A very good attempt!
Whenever you touch nature as the theme you make the readers eco friendly.
First attempt is very good.
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Anu
trees around laugh...lovely!!
ReplyDeleteExcellent Ramesh - agree the first is stunningly beautiful.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
beautiful.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful one my friend....
ReplyDeleteMelanie