Sunday, August 29, 2010

Haikus Only : OSI & Haiku Heights ( 2)



Haiku Heights Prompt : Resurrection
OSI Prompt : Empty



Destroyed monument
Of my big ego craves for
Its resurrection

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Deserts live on
With nature’s empty promise of
Rains tomorrow…

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Resurrect my dead
Dreams, for I breathe hope
Moment to moment

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Prompted by my heart:


Rainbow melts
And my winged dreams
Catch colours
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19 comments:

  1. anupamaAugust 30, 2010 at 12:20 AM

    Pyaara Dost,
    Good Afternoon!
    Dreams melt,
    And I give back the colours,
    To someonelse's dreams,
    And a rainbow is formed!
    Wishing you a bright and beautiful day,
    Sasneham,
    Anu

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  2. SarasAugust 30, 2010 at 12:43 AM

    Lovely Lines, nice Haikus Sood Ji!

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  3. Harshad MehtaAugust 30, 2010 at 6:07 AM

    Last one is best.

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  4. AnonymousAugust 30, 2010 at 7:48 AM

    I love these haikus - I've read you before, guess it's time I commented. :)

    The ego one made me smile, and wince a little...

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  5. Sandra.ifAugust 30, 2010 at 7:52 AM

    resurrect...a word that fills all emptiness...interesting!

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  6. CarinaAugust 30, 2010 at 9:26 AM

    Beautiful haikus today, Ramesh. I loved them all. My favorite was the desert.

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  7. mareymercyAugust 30, 2010 at 2:25 PM

    All of these are quite nice - I love the ego-monument one!

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  8. SandyCarlsonAugust 30, 2010 at 5:03 PM

    Keep breathing that hope! Breath is life is resurection!

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  9. Tumblewords:August 30, 2010 at 5:19 PM

    I like the way you looked at this prompt - nice work!

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  10. Nalini HebbarAugust 30, 2010 at 8:00 PM

    Loved the last one!

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  11. Ramesh SoodAugust 31, 2010 at 12:01 AM

    Thanks every one visiting here..it encourages..

    Thanks Nalini for the visit.. have added your link.. will get to know about your posts.. yes, last one was prompted by the heart..I feel emboldened.. look forward to regular visits..

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  12. magiceyeAugust 31, 2010 at 6:34 AM

    all so lovely!

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  13. AnonymousAugust 31, 2010 at 5:16 PM

    I think when it comes from the heart, it always speaks beautifully!

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  14. Bobbie SandlinAugust 31, 2010 at 7:24 PM

    This is beautiful writing!

    Deserts live on
    With nature’s empty promise of
    Rains tomorrow…

    ^ That made me smile :)

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  15. Tammie LeeAugust 31, 2010 at 8:57 PM

    all three are wonderful poems, thank you. and thank you for your lovely comment.

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  16. Yamini MeduriSeptember 1, 2010 at 12:46 AM

    Hello Mr.Ramesh

    thanks for inviting me here...loved this place..!!
    wonderful write ups..!!!

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  17. BeyondSeptember 1, 2010 at 2:02 AM

    Simple and lovely.. learning from nature

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  18. AnonymousSeptember 3, 2010 at 2:42 AM

    These are wonderful but I particularly like the first one.

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  19. PattiSeptember 6, 2010 at 4:22 PM

    You sure have a knack for the haiku- they are awesome! I especially like the last one the best I think!

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