Wednesday, November 2, 2011

Haiku for 3WW






No more fear of jerks,
Whose punctured egos could
Wreak carnage, kill dreams...

Wreak Carnage, kill dreams...
God let me dream fresh and new
Wiping out the past..

RS : )

 

9 comments:

  1. I love that you added a haiku as well..it is like the essence of the first piece..crisp and true..Jae

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  2. As usual you are very prolific. Well done.

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  3. Inspiring sir.... really inspiring... God let me spring to life everytime these jerks try to bog me down with negativity and let their negativity be slapped out of their systems with my recoil... I always find your write ups like a conforming mirror.... telling me m on d right track...... bouncing back on me d light dat God has given each one of us..... reaffirming my faith in life, hope, positivity and possibilities. Thank you sir

    Regards
    RM

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  4. Concise version also well done!! You packed it all in a few lines as well RS!!

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  5. I love the idea of dream fresh~

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  6. Yes, God, please let us dream fresh - every one of us! I love this!

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