Friday, November 4, 2011

I Pluck A Flower..


Written for Rebecca's Haiku My Heart..


I pluck a flower,
Earth is sad; for, I steal a
Bit of her beauty...


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As I walk, Moon too
Moves along; makes me walk with
My head lifted up...




RS : )
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11 comments:

  1. anthonynorthNovember 4, 2011 at 8:34 AM

    Enjoyed both but the first was excellent.

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  2. Vinay Leo R.November 4, 2011 at 9:19 AM

    I agree with Anthony, even I admired the first more! :) Lovely haiku both!

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  3. ElizabethNovember 4, 2011 at 9:26 AM

    Loved the first one, Ramesh. Very poignant. x

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  4. NankaNovember 4, 2011 at 10:33 AM

    Nice haiku both RS!! You have traveled from down on earth to the heights of heaven!!

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  5. peggy gattoNovember 4, 2011 at 4:29 PM

    lovely about the flowers!
    that's why I almost always leave my roses on the bush!

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  6. AnonymousNovember 4, 2011 at 7:32 PM

    excellent.

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  7. Fran aka RedondowriterNovember 4, 2011 at 9:59 PM

    As always, Ramesh, both speak deeply to my heart. What a gift you have for writing haiku.

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  8. Tarang SinhaNovember 5, 2011 at 3:50 AM

    Nice set of haiku especially the first one.

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  9. Kim MailhotNovember 5, 2011 at 6:31 AM

    Your words made me sigh today, Ramesh. A good sigh.

    Have a wonderful weeekend !

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  10. CherylNovember 5, 2011 at 11:30 AM

    I love both haiku. You really are gifted, you know?

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  11. foxysueNovember 6, 2011 at 1:50 AM

    Your words move my mood upwards, thank you.

    Sue x

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