Sunday, November 6, 2011

Sings a Little Birdie..



Written for ONE SINGLE IMPRESSION
PROMPT : BIRDIE..
thanks to Kaykuala of Rainbow for the prompt..

Sings a Little Birdie..

A little birdie
Comes in my window and sings
Morning’s happy songs

Morning’s happy songs
I try to sing along but
Birdie sings better


Birdie sings better
Seldom misses any notes
A real talent that

 A real talent that
And if it’s not there someday
I imagine it.

I imagine it
And hear the same melody
Soothing to my soul

Soothing to my soul
comes in my window and sings
A little birdie..


RS : )


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14 comments:

  1. ElizabethNovember 6, 2011 at 7:31 AM

    Beautiful. x

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  2. Yousei HimeNovember 6, 2011 at 8:38 AM

    This form can be very tricky to make work smoothly, but I feel you've done it. I like the concept of the bird of happiness delivering songs. We definitely have to image those songs on some days. Thank you for your visit to my site. Hope you'll fly over again sometime.

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  3. anthonynorthNovember 6, 2011 at 9:08 AM

    Lovely words.

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  4. NankaNovember 6, 2011 at 10:34 AM

    A lovely birdie song and you cannot beat their tweets!! Happy tweeting RS!!

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  5. AnonymousNovember 6, 2011 at 10:54 AM

    Lovely piece of poetry!

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  6. AnonymousNovember 6, 2011 at 12:01 PM

    I can imagine that...so well..:)

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  7. BeyondNovember 6, 2011 at 6:49 PM

    that reminds me of the poem 'what does little birdie says...'

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  8. JimNovember 7, 2011 at 2:07 AM

    It would be nice to have a bird come sing to wouldn't it. Our birds sing outside and I sing back to them. Then we sing back and forth to each other.
    ..

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  9. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryNovember 7, 2011 at 8:34 AM

    amazing.

    you have lovely imaginations.

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  10. AnonymousNovember 7, 2011 at 6:35 PM

    we all need a lil birdie with a happy song, sadly not many get to have one :(
    happy gooseberry day!

    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/11/07/there-to-stay/

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  11. The Write GirlNovember 7, 2011 at 6:55 PM

    Beautiful rhyming scheme Ramesh. I enjoyed every verse.

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  12. Harshad MehtaNovember 8, 2011 at 4:53 AM

    Soothing rhyme.

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  13. Maggie Patti Barbara Frankford-WaltonNovember 10, 2011 at 10:01 AM

    impressive rhyming,

    keep it up.

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  14. rainysunNovember 19, 2011 at 6:11 AM

    ahhhh yet another amazing poem!!!! reminds of good old days when birdie used to come and sit at ur porch and sing to u!!!!the early morning chirping of the birdie!!! amazing rhyming in the poem sir!!!

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