CRIMSON HAIKU..
Written for One Single Impression..
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Written for One Single Impression..
Cuts on heart
make love flow freely;
crimson gleams
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Crimson clouds
crave for one last glimpse;
setting Sun..
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He wears
crimson just like hers;
first blush
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He wears
crimson just like hers;
first blush
RS:)
Beautiful Haiku. I love the last one most, making me guess who will make the first move!
ReplyDeleteAn excellent and varied trio.
ReplyDeleteWow! Amazing haiku! The second one is my favourite!!! All of them are nicely done!!!
ReplyDeleteHow beautiful... Crimson is the sky, looking lazily at the memories of the previous nights party, of the glittering stars n the gorgeous alluring moon
ReplyDeleteThe words work like the birds above a vast sea..that promise an island nearby....a liveable place some where.
Warm, cozy, Bright
Regards
RM
I enjoyed all of these. :<)
ReplyDeleteWow, "cuts on heart...", just superb!
ReplyDeleteI love the first one. I can relate to it well.
ReplyDeleteGood Haiku form. I prefer the second image. Nature and Haiku are synonomous.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful set....I loved the second one on nature :)
ReplyDeleteGreat set..
ReplyDeleteconversing with the fire
Love the first one the best. The other 2 are my other favorites!
ReplyDeletebeautiful.. i love d 3rd one ... !!
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