Sunday, May 20, 2012

You See Red, Think Black..

Written for  One Single Impression



Prompt: Black and White..

Thanks Leo for the Prompt..

I write Haiku on BLACK AND WHITE..

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I write 'black'
in deep red colour;
a white sheet

a white sheet;
you see deep red here,
 thinking black..

Thinking black
 white sheet vanishes;
mind has fun..

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I often
talk in black and white;
 grey shines bright


RS:)
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9 comments:

  1. anthonynorthMay 20, 2012 at 1:46 AM

    Nicely done, especially the last one.

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  2. Harshad MehtaMay 20, 2012 at 1:54 AM

    First one is brilliant. Mind has its own ways to play.

    And second one is so true!

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  3. Ron. http://rlavalette.wordpress.comMay 20, 2012 at 10:44 AM

    I, too, think black & white, though lost in grey which is all there is. Salute!

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  4. Bruce MillerMay 20, 2012 at 1:48 PM

    A delight to read and a challenge to think about!

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  5. AnonymousMay 20, 2012 at 4:48 PM

    "grey shines bright"....love that!!

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  6. JimMay 20, 2012 at 5:49 PM

    Very nice, Ramesh. I have a problem though, I cannot visualize. I cannot even go to sleep counting sheep because I can never see any sheep to count.
    I don't remember people by their appearance either. There is a name for my condition.
    So for me, 'black' written in red is red.
    ..

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  7. totomaiMay 20, 2012 at 6:03 PM

    it was like a puzzle. intriguing piece

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  8. The Write GirlMay 21, 2012 at 6:32 PM

    I like this concept "thinking black" Nicely written. Love the poetic style you've chosen.

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  9. NAWALMay 24, 2012 at 9:30 AM

    last haiku lays a impact sir! great one :)

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