Written for Leo's Haiku Heights..
(shared with Rebecca's Haiku My Heart..)
Prompt: Mask
I Remove My Mask..
I remove
my mask finally;
God smiles
***
Her eyes
show me my real self;
myths shatter
***
She is calm;
a better me smiles
back at me
RS :)
Claude LOPEZ-GINISTY May 12, 2012 1:54 AM
Deep and beautiful: I felt the urge to translate them into French!
Thank you
J'enlève
mon masque finalement;
Dieu sourit
Ses yeux
me montrent mon vrai moi;
les mythes s'effondrent
Elle est calme;
un meilleur moi
me rend mon sourire
Thank You, Claude..for your kindness.. .. Ramesh Sood
Claude LOPEZ-GINISTY May 12, 2012 1:54 AM
Deep and beautiful: I felt the urge to translate them into French!
Thank you
J'enlève
mon masque finalement;
Dieu sourit
Ses yeux
me montrent mon vrai moi;
les mythes s'effondrent
Elle est calme;
un meilleur moi
me rend mon sourire
Thank You, Claude..for your kindness.. .. Ramesh Sood
Simple and beautiful... the last one esp...! :) Wishing loads of smiles your way...
ReplyDeleteTruth likes to travel bare feet
That's very deep Ramesh. I like I remove my mask.
ReplyDeleteRead it twice..still lot of thoughts fighting..just 1 word- brilliant..
ReplyDeleteRemoving one's mask is difficult for some! Thank you for sharing! :)
ReplyDeleteSimple words .. but at the same time effective words ...
ReplyDeleteAnu :)
Deep and beautiful: I felt the urge to translate them into French!
ReplyDeleteThank you
J'enlève
mon masque finalement;
Dieu sourit
Ses yeux
me montrent mon vrai moi;
les mythes s'effondrent
Elle est calme;
un meilleur moi
me rend mon sourire
I am so very thankful to you Claude..hope friends from France will cherish..love your gesture..a true giver, You..
ReplyDeleteI live in tiny Switzerland where part of the country also speaks French!
DeleteA dream destination Claude... I have only seen your country in Indian Movies..how beautiful..May you continue to be as joyful as ever..
DeleteDear Ramesh,
DeleteWhen Indians shoot movies (Bollywood types of movies), they do it most of the time in my region, 2 miles from my home!
Have a nice w/e!
Claude
Very beautiful...I specially like the last one ~
ReplyDeleteGood day Ramesh, what a wonderful triplet of haiku. I loved reading these. I especially liked the second one. It has a deeper spiritual meaning. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteNamaste
...a better me smiles back at me ~ delightful ~ Excellent haiku as usual ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteWhat a treat Ramesh! I din't know you knew French. I hope to understand this beautiful language someday. Lovely haiku!!
ReplyDeleteLove the first one! Of course, God can see through our masks, but this is about being honest with ourselves.
ReplyDeleteLovely, Ramesh, especially the last one. And how beautiful they are in French!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful set of haiku...I loved all three ...equally!
ReplyDeleteall smiles
ReplyDeletei like the second best
ReplyDeleteugly man mask