Monday, May 28, 2012

Streaks of Joy.... Haiku

Written for Shooting Stars
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Sharing with Haiku Heights...Joy


Streaks of Joy..

Shooting stars;
she makes a quiet wish,
her blush speaks...

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Shooting stars;
he makes a loud wish,
quietens heart..

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Shooting stars;
she, he say a wish,
and love gleams..

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Shooting stars;
her open palms wait
for diamonds...

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Shooting stars;
I quietly watch those 
streaks of joy


RS:)

17 comments:

  1. Excellent haiku ~ feels very romantic and lots of lovely visuals, (diamonds, love gleams and more ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  2. Nice set of haiku. I love the last one.

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  3. wishing on a shooting star for love....well-done

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  4. It will be more than just streaks of joy if we're talking diamonds :D I like the story in your haiku. Happy Tuesday, Rameesh.

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  5. Oh.. I can't afford diamonds as yet RSji ;) but your haiku set glitters like them.

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  6. What beautiful images you created with your haiku.

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  7. I love your style of telling short stories with your haiku. This looks like the beginnings of young love. A delightful read, Ramesh.

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  8. What joy! I love the beautiful and romantic haikus.

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  9. Wonderful set......Last but one is full of delight....

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  10. Delightful...I love the last one :)

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  11. Very lovely and romantic haiku ~

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  12. you write so beautifully of stars...while i was dazzled by the moon! haiku my heart is waiting for you!

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  13. How did you find "Shooting Stars"? I've been looking for the Tackle It Tuesday prompt for two weeks, but without success!

    In Judith’s Garden

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