Wednesday, May 23, 2012

Haiku - 3WW



Here's a Haiku


Prompts:  Novice, Sear, Flesh


Searing heat burns flesh,
novice walks on sand barefoot;
inflamed footprints…


RS:)

9 comments:

  1. A clever use of the words. They all fit so aptly.

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  2. love it. danced that hotfoot waltz a few times.

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  3. Maybe we crossed paths a little this week Ramesh..sometimes it's wise to cast your shoes aside..but on hot sand definitely good..Jae

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  4. Makes me long for the beach! Nicely written.

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  5. Makes me think of a baby finding the shore for the first time. There truly, is no other way to walk on sand but bare. Very lovely.

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