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Wednesday, December 8, 2010
Fears Unfair Judgement.....Haikus
Written for 3WW... judge, nightfall, safety
Birds judge approaching Nightfall, return to warm Safety of home trees..
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Comes nightfall, snuggles She in safety of four walls, Fears unfair judgment.. *****
Both very true!! ...and both lovely Haiku compositions.
Looks like nightfall hurries everyone to the safety of their homes and night demands a fair judgement, when it is such a beautiful time with the stars twinkling blue and the pale moon gliding across the inky blue sky!!
The beauty of coming home - for birds or people..they worked brilliantly together..Jae
ReplyDeleteYaa, Really Nice!! Reminded me of coming home from my Hostel Days!! :)
ReplyDeleteLovely images. Well done.
ReplyDeleteDouble Duty
Both very true!! ...and both lovely Haiku compositions.
ReplyDeleteLooks like nightfall hurries everyone to the safety of their homes and night demands a fair judgement, when it is such a beautiful time with the stars twinkling blue and the pale moon gliding across the inky blue sky!!
Hope that is some more inspiration Rameshji!! :D
Awesomely done! Short and crisp...
ReplyDeleteSuccinct and so comforting haikus...
ReplyDeleteThe word "safety" made it so!
Lovely rendition Ramesh!!!
what can be safer than coming home...for birds as well as for us...beautiful haikus...they spread safety :)
ReplyDeletePerfect choice of the words Ramesh, enjoyed it ):
ReplyDeleteTake care x
I love the way you write. This is another great couple of pieces. Love and Light, Sender
ReplyDeletegood one, home is where the heart is! :)
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