Wednesday, December 8, 2010

Fears Unfair Judgement.....Haikus

Written for 3WW... judge, nightfall, safety


Birds judge approaching
Nightfall, return to warm
Safety of home trees..


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Comes nightfall, snuggles
She in safety of four walls,
Fears unfair judgment
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10 comments:

  1. The beauty of coming home - for birds or people..they worked brilliantly together..Jae

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  2. Yaa, Really Nice!! Reminded me of coming home from my Hostel Days!! :)

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  3. Both very true!! ...and both lovely Haiku compositions.

    Looks like nightfall hurries everyone to the safety of their homes and night demands a fair judgement, when it is such a beautiful time with the stars twinkling blue and the pale moon gliding across the inky blue sky!!

    Hope that is some more inspiration Rameshji!! :D

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  4. Succinct and so comforting haikus...

    The word "safety" made it so!

    Lovely rendition Ramesh!!!

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  5. what can be safer than coming home...for birds as well as for us...beautiful haikus...they spread safety :)

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  6. Perfect choice of the words Ramesh, enjoyed it ):
    Take care x

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  7. I love the way you write. This is another great couple of pieces. Love and Light, Sender

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  8. good one, home is where the heart is! :)

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