Saturday, December 11, 2010

OSI : WIN HH: Life LOL: Fishy

Written for Haiku Heights prompt: Life and OSI prompt: WIN


Birds hop from tree to
Tree, greeting life, winning
Hearts for the day..

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Heart and mind
Fight each other, heart wins,
Life celebrates..

Written for OSI Prompt: WIN & LOL : Fishy

Nothing Fishy Here..

Heart had pushed me
To put a poem, a long one
Mind resisted, I Contemplated,
Decided to make mind win..
So removed it..quietly
Sometimes, celebrations
Need to take a back seat
For the larger good,
In this case , for the good
Of the visitor, that's YOU..
Nothing fishy here please..

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22 comments:

  1. Interesting take on Life, Ramesh!

    Best regards.

    Carlos

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  2. Great take on the prompt both in the two Haikus and the excellent poem!!

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  3. Loved your haikus better. :)
    Great take RS!!
    Always fun to read you.

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  4. Wonderful haikus.. Great to have you on my blog.. I have replied to comment window type too..

    --Someone is Special--

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  5. celebration of life when heart wins a battle over mind? wow.. what a beautiful haiku, Rji :)

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  6. I love your haikus. And "Nothing Fishy Here" was one I completely related to. As always, your blog is a pleasure to visit! Uplifting and honest, always.

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  7. I absolutely love that second haiku! While I usually enjoy your longer poems, I had to chuckle at your contest between mind and heart.

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  8. Win of heart is always more satisfying even if nt right. Well Done RS

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  9. how wonderful when the heart wins....

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  10. positive joyful words...so nice!

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  11. very beautiful pair of haikus...especially the second one... :)

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  12. Impressive how you are able to melt all the words into a winning thought.

    Please have a good new week.

    daily athens

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  13. A nice win for the heart! Clever work!

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  14. I love the second haiku the best! That old heart vs. mind battle- so common- at least for me. Yes- the heart triumphs!!! Nicely done~~~

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  15. yes, there are moments that requires celebration to take that backseat

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  16. beautiful...
    your words dance magic..

    hope to see you at our potluck tonight.

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  17. Nice one Ramesh. Winning in short I must say....

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  18. Lovely to have you back with us at LoL!! Thank you.
    Always a pleasure to read your humor.
    Do join us again this Saturday!!

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  19. Fantastic work Sir...
    I loved the haikus a lot.. :)

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