Wednesday, December 1, 2010

Good Habit, Bad Habit

3WW Prompts: Revival , Demise, Effort


Happy demise of
Bad habits, revival won’t
Need any effort..



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Sad demise of a
Good habit, revival needs
tremendous efforts…


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17 comments:

  1. eyeographyDecember 1, 2010 at 6:08 AM

    So true Sir...
    Great haikus:)

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  2. Jae RoseDecember 1, 2010 at 7:35 AM

    These two fit together perfectly..a very cheering read..Jae :)

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  3. NankaDecember 1, 2010 at 8:27 AM

    Beautiful Haiku's
    Two this time around
    opposites in form

    Loved both immensely!!

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  4. TweetyDecember 1, 2010 at 10:15 AM

    ah what a contrast...lovely..you seem to be becoming a master of haiku's...

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  5. Thom GabrukiewiczDecember 1, 2010 at 1:33 PM

    good stuff.

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  6. AnonymousDecember 1, 2010 at 2:00 PM

    Sigh...too true.

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  7. AngelDecember 1, 2010 at 4:25 PM

    Both all too true.

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  8. Helena MalheurDecember 1, 2010 at 10:26 PM

    very nicely done! Truths articulated with ease -- you better not discard this habit! Love your haikus!

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  9. Lalita SinghDecember 2, 2010 at 1:56 AM

    Very True!! Deep meanings!! Loved it!! :)

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  10. Gazal BharadwajDecember 2, 2010 at 3:09 AM

    So simple and true Sir....

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  11. M. RekaDecember 2, 2010 at 11:08 AM

    Loved both of them Ramesh, simple and beautiful :)

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  12. A Bit of the BlarneyDecember 3, 2010 at 3:49 AM

    Well said!!! Cathy

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  13. rebeccaDecember 3, 2010 at 7:35 AM

    interesting "bookend" haiku.
    now to write about the middle of the road, oh, sweet balance!

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  14. jocoDecember 3, 2010 at 9:07 AM

    Playing with words again.
    A never ending pastime.

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  15. AnonymousDecember 3, 2010 at 9:36 PM

    ...a wisp of light and dark trailing one's way...

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  16. Voices of NLDDecember 4, 2010 at 7:32 AM

    I too like the opposites in both hiakus. Says so much in so few words

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  17. RamaDramaDecember 7, 2010 at 7:18 PM

    Nice!

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