Wednesday, December 1, 2010

Good Habit, Bad Habit

3WW Prompts: Revival , Demise, Effort


Happy demise of
Bad habits, revival won’t
Need any effort..



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Sad demise of a
Good habit, revival needs

tremendous efforts…


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17 comments:

  1. These two fit together perfectly..a very cheering read..Jae :)

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  2. Beautiful Haiku's
    Two this time around
    opposites in form

    Loved both immensely!!

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  3. ah what a contrast...lovely..you seem to be becoming a master of haiku's...

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  4. very nicely done! Truths articulated with ease -- you better not discard this habit! Love your haikus!

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  5. Very True!! Deep meanings!! Loved it!! :)

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  6. Loved both of them Ramesh, simple and beautiful :)

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  7. interesting "bookend" haiku.
    now to write about the middle of the road, oh, sweet balance!

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  8. Playing with words again.
    A never ending pastime.

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  9. ...a wisp of light and dark trailing one's way...

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  10. I too like the opposites in both hiakus. Says so much in so few words

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